Yes, the story is a little all over the place, especially when it comes to emotions, their development and expression. This minute there is no sign of love, then it's born by the cute counterpart and then it's gone in a flash or dragged along all around. Don't get me wrong, it's not like this isn't a way to describe a first or teenage love, yet there could have been a more fullfilling path taken, if you consider the chapter count. Anyways, to sum it up for younger readers it's a nice and fluffy read, as for more mature readers it could (not is, but could!) a cute reminder of the past. Lol.

... At least up till 2 chapters. The summary says she's a girl who doesn't like guys like normal girls, yet within a couple of pages, she sees someone "Cute" and immediately admits to herself that "Oops, it seems my manhating days are behind me!", after which it's a constant back and forth, she realises she likes him, but then holds back to let him do his own thing, then questions the doki doki in her chest, then admits it again... it's all giving me motion sickness really!

Art is the cute fluffy kind but characters start to swim together after a while because they're not easily discernable. Also the point of so many characters and the storyline itself is not becoming clear. Perhaps before investing in this, wait for more chapters to come out.