It should be a crime to have this good of an artist and such horrible writing the artist of this manwha should be recommended to an actual writer instead of this amateur with a story written as badly as chinese 1 chapter a day money farms with instead 1 chapter takes a month

- Worst Status Window ever in existence , no name , age , race/sex ,class Attack and Attack speed instead of Strength and agility ect, No skills or abilities, 2 stats per stat window? not all or just 1 per pop up/stat window?
- No explanation of any kind ever of MCs abilities or how the world works works the story is even so lazy it expects you to already know of hunters Ranks from other manwha doesn't provide any world building as to how rare S-Classes and as such are or the requirements no clue if there are elements, what classes exist, what the best classes are considered nothing we don't even know how abilities work how they are gained how many you have nothing not even how items work or how the monsters are categorized or why the monsters and dungeons even exist
- Story is beyond saving already author speedrunning the pace of the story and the quality of the story is horrible (note that i'm not calling the idea/concept horrible but the authors way of telling it) chapter 6 so far and our MC has died to the 6 Traitors , reincarnated, encountered bully type side characters 2 times and 1 kidnapper who has also kidnapped and threatened the MC and FMC for virtually no reason which probably means this manwha will continue to be riddled with small annoying villains that are villains for no reason other than filler for a nonexistent storyline other than everything already mentioned the MC does a test that for some reason exists while no one in 100+ years has passed the test and the MC passes it and he gets promoted from F rank > to E rank😕 What? Also the author expects us to care about the MC and FMC dying and their family dying while the main reason the 6 kill them is because he's pretty much trying to strip them of their job and status and the way his parents died was so stupid and meaningless that it had no affect on the viewer they died to WOLVES and they could've just run away as they weren't injured in a major way or his mother left as well and it is never referenced that Kanna is his sister nor that the MCs parents were hers as well and in the reincarnation they are neighbours however it was Severly implied to the point most readers THINK she's his sister so the story is so bad we don't even know the previous relationship between the MC and FMC

Either read it for the art or drop it entirely , I'm probably gonna read this in raws just with the art as the story is a mess anyways to see if it gets better or if it gets worse drop it as well

the only reason i will not be giving this a 1/10 because of the story is the beautiful and colorful artstyle which could've been used by a better writer to make a great manwha and will definitely be looking out for future works featuring Bashikou as the artist

... Last updated on May 3rd, 2023, 7:45pm