From Hana-mi:
A oneshot about the developing relationship between an out-of-work wanderer and a mistreated boy.
Oneshot (Complete)






I found this oneshot quite disturbing. Shiver.
The relationship between the boy and the man should have stayed platonic. Because of the sex scene, especially the line "Do you know what I'm doing" one tends to read everything he said before as a way to gain the boy's trust, only with the objective of getting him in this position. His interest in the boy didn't seem sincere to me at all, he was just a pedophile.
I suppose this will be fine if you like a thin plot and don't mind shota.
One shouldnt expect too much out of oneshot however this particular one try to be more than it should. ambition is appreciated, the plot and characters are quite interesting as it is not too cliche, however it fell short. one is left with too many nagging thoughts and unfulfilled desire. this could be stretch for 1 more chapter, or just even making this one shot longer (add 10-20 more pages for example).
Uhm... this was pretty good and actually quite interesting but there just wasn't enough characterisation and not enough conclusion either with both the characters and the story. On the plus side, the art is quite good.