The pacing in this story is on par with very bad Chinese works. The leads are both very boring, as are the decisions they keep making. The only interesting thing in this whole work would be the in-laws, and they're largely relegated to minor side roles. Barely even see them when they're not gushing over the FL. Which is another boring thing. They ALL gush over FL, unless they're antagonists of some sort. EXTREMELY boring, would not recommend.

The pacing is all over the place. You see waaaay more of the scenery, random chairs, the bed curtains, wall and window treatments and so on than the characters. I love a good setting and world building IF the world is actually unique and drawn well. This is literally cut and paste backgrounds, extras, furniture and even jewelry from what looks like a program because you can see THE EXACT same elements used in quite literally 24 other manhwas. I know. I fucking counted.

Characters, especially if they're somewhat minor, are not drawn AT ALL so I have no idea who the hell is talking unless they're addressing someone...and even then, if there's more than 2 people in the room it's hella crazy trying to follow the conversation.

The story would be fun and I love this genre but goddamn they need new art directors and editors. Yeah, the artist is actually fine. Looks like they're new so I understand that they need practice in order to improve and I'm glad they're given the opportunity. That's cool. What's not is whoever is NOT proofing shit. The Duke of the North's beard should NOT be appearing and disappearing in consecutive order during the same scene. What the hell.

DROPPED until they get new editors and art directors.

ch 18 ,,

there's pretty much alot of things going on in 18 chapters and im very confused about some aspects of the story