dying by chapter 5..
things happen too fast, with too little history behind it...everything is fueled by sudden impulses -.-;
heartfelt tears and "glowing" smiles (that come along with the half page shine that makes the other characters go goggled eye...like this "O.O" ) all come veryy spontaneously.
its hard to sympathise with anyone but Yuuma, who is a side character that doesn't have many scenes or even say much for the matter.. LOL, doesnt that say something? but wait, there aren't any thoughtful lines anyway..
other than the trivial daily talk...the lines that are highlighted are:
(happy side) "this is destiny" "i-i like him!" "im so happy" happy tears
(sad side) "i cant do this anymore" "thank you for everything" "you liar!" sad tears
soo...i agree with the criticism that the characters have communication problems =.=; 'lack of all verbal skills' - when they have something in their minds, they are either too cowardly, or lack ** the skills ** to actually talk to each other about it...and instead they try to convey it through their actions, and the three top actions are: running away, crying and grabbing each other~ (of course they then shout some things to hurt the other person, without explaining why the heck they are saying it)
cant help but laugh at all the attempts to make this heartwarming and drama-worthy.. shouldn't they label this as a comedy? too cliche...and predictable...Kotone is just this 2D selfish girl with no sense of morals or proper emotions - and the guys are just miraculously oblivious to it.
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kotone has everyone in the palm of her hands, they dance to her false stories and things get stirred up by just this one little sad girl...she doesn't seem to have ANY good points at all? is that realistic? even Hitler had a scarce few things that can be said to be good (like saving the german economy...) but this girl... =_=; she's like an empty human filled with all the bad things we dont like..(she cant even be called particularly pretty....)
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sasamoto is like a playboy that isn't smooth enough or sweet --;
something like Bokura ga Ita's Yano or Aishiteruze Baby's Kippei are awesome playboys that you can easily imagine falling in love with because of their sweet attachment to one girl...but sasamoto...has none of these endearing traits --
all in all, i would say that this is a very good portrayal of immature and unrealistic infatuations.
its too idealistic to think that they could understand each other without saying much -_-; but actually i dont think they had much to be understood anyway...too flat =.=;...
such transparent characters....
and humans aren't transparent.
i can sum this story up with one word:
"shallow".
thats my opinion.
lol intemango's link poor communication kills sums it up perfectly too 😛
sigh...the story line itself can explore many twists, and its alright for many coincidences to happen (which there are MANY here)...and the only thing that would save it from being condemned for bad plot would be amazing characters that we can sympathise with~ characters that aren't so predictable and 2 dimensional, or it'll all fall apart..
i'm giving it two because it could have been done worse and the art is alright.