I had a lot of fun rolling my eyes at the plot development. There is no communication, there is no growth as a couple. If Kieron's mother dies, their marriage is going to be over simply because they don't communicate with each other. Kieron's mother communicates all the important stuff to them instead of them just telling each other.
Kieron never expresses any regret b/c she should have gotten his letter. As a reporter you'd think he'd have just asked her, why did you leave,
didn't you get my letter
, are you mad about {insert plot}, and so on in typical fashion when someone who should love you is acting cold. Especially since at the beginning of the manga he was shocked to learn she was on trail. How about a: "I didn't know that had happened, I am sorry. It was not my intention to hurt you." Again, the logical things people would have brought up at some point. But nope, let me just assume you perfectly understood all that happened back then. I will act like I never used you since what I did wasn't wrong at all, & I shall not feel any regret.
Next he pretty much threatens her to marry him, and seems to forget that he threatened her? Would it kill him to remember his own threats and consider his wifes feelings?
Beth is wrong too. Don't worry I didn't pick sides, they were both handling everything wrong. Beth never says anything. How could you do such a thing, I loved you and you just left me, I was so lonely and hurt, blah blah etc, the typical things people ask before running into the arms of they who hurt you. The other issues with her would require me to spoil.
This whole story could have been told the same but better by:
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resolving the issue they are mad at each other in the first 2.5 chapters by just having them ask obvious question people like them would have asked in the beginning.
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Have the last 2.5 chapters be about trying to rebuild their lost trust. The only thing that needs changing is the dialog really. The scene on the beach, he noticed she was still struggling to trust him and calls her out on it. That scene of her talking about a dream, change it to her confessing she is still scared but wishes to push past the pain towards a better future if he would be willing to do so.
These simple changes would have allowed readers to watch those two grow together as they worked out a problem like a couple should. Instead of devoting 5 chapters to nobody saying anything to each other and having some outsider be the one to push them together.