The characters are nicely built, the plot is okish, but the narration is all over the place, the author isn't trying to make narration coherent so it's a very long story for very little point.

There was a lot of build up for the relationship that just never paid off really. They have very few sweet moments just in general. Then there is a confusing subplot added where one chapter we're told someone is kidnapped, the next they're walking around fine like nothing happened. Throughout we are introduced to characters and told they have a certain stance on something which is then never clarified, relevant, or expanded upon. Worst of all, towards the end it through in an additional layer of "they knew each other!" But then never explained WHY that went south, why they were ripped apart, why they're suddenly allowed back together by everyone. It implies it was known by the one boy since the start but he LITERALLY never acted like that ONCE and even acted opposite to that quite often. And it shouldn't have been a matter of forgetting either since BOTH CORRESPONDED WELL INTO THEIR TEENS.


Sigh. It was just an entire plot mess with zero payoff of any kind and it makes you read over 90chps to find that out.