It really would be alright if the chapters weren’t uploaded out of order and if the chapters were organized. But they’re not, so it’s confusing and hard to follow what’s going on. I feel like this isn’t the author’s fault, but it’s hard to tell because of how disjointed and short each chapter feels. This is also one of those rare instances where I think more chapters would be good for pacing. There’s just so much packed into each short chapter that it reads like a synopsis of an actual novel as opposed to a stand alone story. Like some plot points should have taken 3 chapters to go over but instead it’s a third of the chapter and two more major things happen in the same chapter. It really had potential but I had to drop it.