The idea behind this work is very creative but its execution unfortunately did not meet its potential at all. Half the time I'm left guessing which speech bubble belongs to whom, while the other half has me thoroughly confused about the elaborate setting and how it operates because the explanations are no where near adequate. The author's note at the end trying to clarify what she had written didn't quite clear anything up for me either. And I haven't even talked about other even more bizarre things happening in the plot, but I think you can get the gist that I was not impressed by this.