I mean...4 pages? ...really?
I don't know if Ican review this, since there is no development at all - and that wasn't even the point! The plot would've been good, though.
And I always love Takamiya Azuma-sensei's art and characters' bittersweet feelings.

A lot of people are commenting on how this manga is only four pages. True, I would love to see this story fleshed out into a full-fledged series, but I think this short piece says a lot for all that it's worth. In fiction, the style's called "flash fiction," "micro-story," or "short short," and this type of writing is usually done in fifty words or less. In flash fiction, a complete story must be told within word count restrictions and must also include all the essential elements of plot and character (i.e. must contain exposition, climax, resolution as well as defined characters who are not the same at the end as they were at the beginning of the piece, etc.). Naturally, it's a very difficult style of writing, which makes me appreciate this piece more. "Yuuwaku" more or less had all the crucial elements of a short short and was enjoyable, dramatic, and suspenseful to read. I'm a creative writing major, so I was definitely pleasantly surprised with this "flash manga." I'll give it a 9/10. It's nice to see this style every now and again! :3

I thought it was longer. I agree with everything yohtan has said. I loved the art, and I would like to read more. Because I don't think 4 pages can be called "one shot". I can't really rate this, since it was really too short. What a pity, I think it could have been much better if longer.

... Last updated on March 24th, 2014, 9:10am

I agree with the other 2 reviewers... it seems kinda incomplete and only 4 pages? Man its very promising... certainly hope there's a sequel or something...

Well I was sure it was a joke... it's so short I would say it's the worst story but if there was more it would be a good story. Well the art is good like yothan said XD

Well, that left me hanging. How can you review or rate something like this? Seriously. This was the shortest short short oneshot of all time. I don't wanna give away too much (like there is anything to give away anyway) but this was four pages of, lolwut? Why produce something like this; unless if was from an already establish series I would understand but it's not. I don't know. The art was pretty good though. So that's a positive.