@ liquidsin, This is a common style among most of the wuxia manhua, if you have read any of them you would know,
Also by all means you can just SKIP READING the narration if you think they are too excessive.
I believe the intention is for it to be read as a light novel, not sure though, maybe someone else can shed some light on this, although i find occasional narrations helpful when the images gets too "busy", which they often do in wuxia manhua's.

Back to the serie it self.

The storys are, fairly cheesy, incase u didnt get the memo after first chapter, some ppl dig this type of stuff, some dont, that is cool,
Drawings are very good ofcourse ~!
Fights are amazing~!
Characters, cant tell so far, too few chapters released will see what happens next.

This is about the third prince of a country named Quin, who was born under mysterious circumstances. As he grew up he showed how he was very talented at almost everything and he also surpassed his older brother in everything. He mastered fighting and divine martial arts very soon. So at the age of 19 he already had won a lot of battles and his father promised that he could have the throne even though he is the third prince when he will win the 100th battle. And only then he could marry his childhood friend and love, because she is only allowed to be married to the ruler of the country. The Prince thinks that he will win for sure, for he is really badass, but then some things go not quite according to plan...

So far, after 2 chapters it looks good. I really love the drawings. They are beautiful and very detailed. The fighting scenes look really badass, even though they can be confusing. But I really have a weakness for detailed fantasy weapons and cloths and creative design of those.
When I read the first chap I really hated the hero. He was just too perfect and arrogant. But then the tables turned and now I'm really interested in where the story will go.