From Shoujo Crusade:
Ako is afraid of boys because of an incident from her past. But will a boy she meets by chance be able to change her?
Oneshot (Complete)






Where to begin on this oneshot?
I think for the limited amont of space it was ok, but I've seen much better one shots then this story wise!
I mean, I really think it simply had it's short length and not very conflicted plot-line against it. It might have been good if it had been longer, and more detailed.
Like seriously, only one little speech bubble was explained for her very real fear of talking to men? It's not realistic to even a little bit unless the mangaka were to explain it out more! Not to mention Ako falls in love with the boy after only meeting him after the 3rd time? And then she could magically talk/ and have body contant?(piggy back ride/tending to leg)....um no.... please just don't >.<"
I think what really saved this one shot is that this mangaka can draw pretty good. The boy was really cute, very drool worthy, and the girls looked ok to. Just that the story line needs serious work to be a major sucsess.