first of all, good art

my complaint is its lack of imagination and brain dead, every fight is shallow makes me think its a waste author build it in fantasy setting, or maybe author rush it to write more chapter which make this series easy to forget

i doubt in a week after read this you will be remember mc name and why he do his action to begin with

but hey, maybe its just me, you should try a couple chapter
hope the series become better overtime and has proper ending rather than axed

Chapter 28 is a decent enough place to stop reading this. Odds are its not going to change or introduce anything interesting plotwise from this point on, as it has not done so for a while already. The MC have fought enough different enemies and more or less cemented its place in the world. Its all on repeat now with slightly different faces.

The art is pretty good and the MC motivation can only hold for so long without it becoming a bore to read. Some cool fights as the MC falls down the rabbit hole of his weird idea, it only works in a grimdark world and make no mistake, from the world building we have gotten its all grimdark. Everyone in power, regardless of source, is corrupt and evil and got the masses controlled to a sickening degree.

It advances at a fast pace and has elements of world building, that makes it entertaining enough ... But, the premise is overused and nothing is set, it just plagiarises almost all everything that is introduced.

The trope of destiny is also played terribly. I mean, as the story is playing there's an almost omnipotent natural law that seems to stop him, but at the same time he's just acting like the typical tragic Asian hero even with everything goig absurdly smoothly for him.

It also irritantes me how brain dead the MC is portrayed, if he really wanted something like eternal peace he just needs to sabotage the kingdoms I mean the succubus girl is mere decoration and the gore fest is plain fan-service. Why would you attack the countries that are prepared for you and aren't a threat and show of your strength? (It just feels like when the USA gave photos of the atomic bomb with the timing, basically starting he nuclear carrear of it's enemies) You'd obviously go for the unprepared ones and annex them.

Lastly each battle is getting more and more dragged out ...

... Last updated on September 8th, 2022, 3:32am

Atm, with 7 chapters, the art looks good and its a quite good revenge plot which the MC has a proper reason. Destroy the traitorous kingdom, become op, gets some sidekicks/subordinates, unite the humans, and kill.

Will continue to read this 🙂