39 Chapters (Ongoing)



I casually skimmed to about chapter 8, I think the elements in this story could make for something interesting, but the FL's inability to have a brain hurts the story. I don't think there is anything wrong with her having a weakness to beautiful men, but it would be nice if she was better balanced out with other personality traits.
The ML isn't very smart either and I think its more the authors inability to write smart characters and not the actual ML's fault. He is written as if he is suspicious, calculating and seeking revenge, except he doesn't really do anything besides pander to the FL's weakness. I get he is supposed to unknowingly like her, but why isn't he taking advantage of her carelessness to do research on ways to defeat her? I don't care if you want an excuse to have the ML and the FL share a bed, what I do care about is how the ML passed up a valuable opportunity to scope the castle before going to her bedroom.
Overall the characters don't act like real people and seem only to do things b.c the author wants them to.