Why is there romance when MC is a monk? Why are women being catty bitches with each other over a MONK? Why are women being catty bitches over a man in the first place? As if there aren't a million other ones existing?
Girls, where are your self-respect?! Disgusting.
I mean, I'd understand if this is Theravada Buddhism, but it isn't. This is Shaolin, very cleary a bastion of Mahayana Buddhism. Therefore, once you become a core disciple, you're not leaving to have a family! Period!
(In Theravada Buddhism many boys will become monks for 5 years or so then return to their homes, grow up and marry.
I know because my birth country is Buddhist, as in it's enshrined into the constitution, making it the state religion. Around 96% of the population is some flavor of Buddhist with the vast majority being Theravada. Some men in my family are abbots and we have our own family temple.
I'm also half Chinese and that side is devoutly Mahayana. So, I think I can can safely say I know what I'm talking about.)
The first girl introduced is mentally weak. She was easily influenced by people with bad intentions because she was so desperate for her father's attention, love and validation that she became evil in the original novel.
The father and grandmother and all the older family members are mostly to blame (because you shouldn't have children you're not prepared to care for, duh) but this girl is also partially responsible for her own stupidity.
No one was called out on this. No one was made aware of how the their benign neglect contributed to the girl's physical, psychological and mental deterioration. Whereas the MC was aaaaaall about screaming at his own superiors for their wrong training forms, methods and teachings. For some unholy 50 chapters!
Double standard.
On that note, I don't think this author was fat-phobic. Neither was there any fat shaming.
The above girl became obese out of self-harm. The root of the problem that encouraged this dangerous behavior to develop was corrected, thankfully. Better yet she lost weight responsibly and patiently. No magical herbs or whatever making her skinny overnight.
So there was no sense of a fat girl being shamed for being fat. She figured shit out on her own, realizing her own behavior is contributing to her dissatisfaction about herself.
SHE saved HERSELF. That's incredible. Most women who are in her situation are too busy feeling sorry for themselves to take responsibility, whining about how the world is mean to fat women, and refuses to do what she did to get better. She deserves her flowers for this.
However, giving her a romantic attachment to MC is straight up gross. She's a child compared to MC who, yes, was originally not a monk, but he's also originally waaaaaaaay older than this girl, too.
To make this whole romance nonsense even worse they added a second girl who's even more delusionally infatutated with the monk.
I really like this girl's attitude and looks, but this was so unbearably stupid I have to drop at ch. 60.
Men writing romance into their action stories, 99% of the time will ruin their own work. This is yet another casualty.