This had so much potential, and wasted all of it: lovers kept apart by finances and society, a supernatural aspect, side characters that are more than meets the eye, some underlying family drama — yet all of it is presented in the flattest and most jumbled manner possible.
I can't overstate how much time is wasted on childhood flashbacks of Iori and Yuuichi, and on Yuuichi thinking about how he doesn't want to let go of Iori. We get it, move on, there are other things to develop — like the connection between Ayako (Iori's mother) and Hisayo (of the Yonekura family). Ayako tells Hisayo that she dreamed about her long ago, but that plot point is just...dropped. Are they friends? Star-crossed lovers? Actual lovers? Who knows!
Maruya's art is pretty, but she dropped the ball when it comes to showing emotion. Yuuichi gets Angry Mode and Normal Mode (which also doubles as Sad Mode), while Iori has all of one expression throughout the whole story. As does everyone else, in fact, and they all end up looking bored even in moments that are supposed to be high intensity.
The family drama would've been enough of a story on its own, but then we get some random supernatural twist and, just like that, it turns out that the marriage/illicit lover matter is no longer a concern. Iori and Yuuichi decide they DO want to stay together in spite of both the familial and supernatural issues which, despite being a major source of hardship for both of them, are handwaved as if they're minor inconveniences.
I guess it's alright for a quick read, but the writing and pacing are so clunky that this story is needlessly confusing. Especially when you realize that not much actually happens, that all the actual plot is explained in 2-3 pages, and that so much time is wasted on memories and repeated thoughts.