Girl x Girl x Boy

I had similiar feelings to ultenth, but after reading chapter 5 i think it's a great story. Short, or so it seems, but certainly realistic and understandable and just that little bit deeper than your average fairytale romance.
Certainly worth reading.

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A Well-Rounded, Appreciable Story

by monkeyvoodoo
17 years ago

Rating: 8.6 / 10.0

For the first couple of chapters, I really feel like the author was kind of stumbling over everything. The character artwork is sometimes fine, and sometimes all weird looking. The story and dialogue are sometimes moving along fine, and other times seem forced and unnatural. But that got better as the chapters progressed, and after getting over that, I realized this was a great story. It's not really missing anything (great, for a single-volume story), and the ending didn't leave me RAGING or disappointed, so that's a plus, too. Though it could have used more girl×girl action, I enjoyed it, and I think you should, too.

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Didn't like the start

by ultenth
17 years ago

Rating: 3.0 / 10.0

The start was a little random, and I really really really hated Riri chan and how she completely trashed Yuuko's feelings and walked out on her like their relationship was nothing simply because some random transfer student said she was pretty.

Other than that the story seems pretty cliched, and none of the characters are especially likeable or sympathetic.

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