TL;DR at the bottom
Beyond chapter 220, censorship starts to happen for the English translation. As another person pointed out, the weird placement of the new text bubbles is censorship. Not to mention, those new text bubbles have a different text bubble outline too, they didn't even try hiding it.
The worsens when certain pages have their whole panel or even half of them, vanished completely. This only happens in the English translation, so if you want the real ecchi art, read either the Spanish or the original manhua in the Chinese language.
The translation itself is also done poorly, you could use machine translation, and get possibly a similar, if not better result than the official English translations. The inconsistent naming between official translations is the least problematic issue, there are also grammatical mistakes, poor choice of wordings, etc.
Anyway, even the original story itself is nothing to write home about. Unless you are a huge fan of harems or niche manhuas, I would never recommend this garbage.
First, the story is an absolute mess. The pacing is inconsistent at best, with countless ideas featured left and right, the story becomes a mixed bag of cool additions that never establishes itself as what a decent story is.
For instance,
None of the female characters are distinct from one another, sure, their designs are, but their personality and goals align when they are infected, they lose their personality and become a "companion"(More like a braindead pet) to the male lead.
The characters are poorly written, and side characters are usually one-off characters. Characters usually don't have a discernible role after the reason mentioned in the spoiler, and way too many characters are introduced, without properly understanding and establishing the previous characters. This leads to unique characters that could've been a vital part of the story being bland, and written off poorly. The antagonists are usually one-dimensional, and are usually just jealous of the male lead, causing all of them to feel like the same villain over and over again. The male lead is just a jerk, he watches the side character die, doesn't attempt to save the non-harem characters unless they are proven to be useful for him, and just doesn't do anything for readers to root for him, if you find him to be a great character for you to self-insert into, it may be time to see therapy.
The main issue is that in a harem comic/novel, the characters play a major role in establishing the reason to read it. If you don't like the harem, there is no reason for you to stay reading it. If the characters in a harem are butchered, you wouldn't enjoy reading it. If the side characters and antagonists are written off poorly, the protagonists won't be relatable or make an impact on the readers. There is no reason to enjoy this manhua when none of the characters are worth rooting for.
How can I also not mention the constant art style changes, it just doesn't have a consistent style. Instead of sticking with one art style, even in the same chapter, you could get multiple different art styles, be it for the more erotic and ecchi scenes, or the tame action sequences, the manhua itself never seems to know what it wants to do. Not to mention, even though this manhua is tagged as ecchi, it always seems to want to censor its ecchi, why even make it ecchi in the first place if you are just censoring most of it?
TL;DR
Translation: 1/10
- Bearable before chapter 220, any chapter onwards, just use MT on the original manhua. English translations have numerous censors, and the translations are also done poorly.
Story: 3/10
- A continued downfall since chapter 1, poor pacing, boring story, and a generic plot. Later on, abruptly ending story arcs also become a major concern.
Character: 1/10
- Cliche and tropey characters, as well as side characters, are usually written off poorly and are very one-dimensional. Even the main leads don't get much character development.
Art: 2/10
- Inconsistent art styles, censoring its ecchi scenes, and overall inconsistent quality.
Overall: 2/10
- Die-hard harem fans may be able to enjoy it, but even then, there are so many other better choices to pick from, there is no reason to choose this, especially when the major part of harems, the harem itself, is done poorly.
- Also, if you look at the positive reviews, they also only point out issues, I have no clue why they gave it a positive score when they also just bashing this manhua.
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