A woman reincarnates as a villain in a fantasy story and decides to change fate. To save her favorite character from execution, she offers him a contract marriage — sparking an unexpected romance and a fight against destiny.
28 Chapters (Ongoing)





I’m three chapters in, and it feels like the author wrote a to-do list, then made the characters follow it blindly. The monster prince suddenly agrees to marry the FL just because she saved him. One moment he’s convinced nobody wants him to live, the next he’s like, “Sure, I’ll try being king because you said so.” No growth, no reasoning, just plot convenience.
Meanwhile, the FL treats his kingdom like a one-off prop. She suddenly decides to dethrone his brother after a single line about the kingdom, as if thinking through consequences is optional.
It’s like watching amateur actors stumble through a rehearsal with a terrible script, and no director to make it make sense. Dialogue and actions clash, pacing is rushed, and major events carry zero weight.
In short: the plot moves, but the characters don’t. They’re puppets in a story with little reasoning, little depth, and almost no convincing development, it desperately needs personality, motivation, and most importantly editing.