While the art isn't to my liking, tho the cover is what I fell for, the over all feel of this dj is calming. There's no hurry for anything, and slowly, bit by bit, things fall into place.
As for the shortcomings the usage of Hinata's monologue a bit too much; slow paced story boards like this shouldn't have monologues or dialogues because since this is a visual medium more emphasis should be placed on showing.
And just a last funny quib; two of the faucets in the starting panel are upside down for some reason.