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As proud daughter of House Monique, Aristia was raised to become the next empress of the Castina Empire. But with the appearance of a mysterious new girl, everything has fallen apart: the Emperor has turned his back, and Aristia’s miserable life as a lower queen is cut short by death. However a second chance to change her fate sees her reborn ‒to 7 years earlier! “Is this a dream or reality? Will my destiny repeat?”

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Aristia la Monique: Die gefallene Kaiserin
Hoàng Phi Bị Ruồng Bỏ
L'impératrice abandonnée
La emperatriz abandonada
Ratu yang Dibuang
Suterareta Kouhi
Terkedilmiş İmparatoriçe
Брошенная императрица
الإمبراطورة المهجورة
จักรพรรดินีที่ถูกลืม
捨てられた皇妃
被废弃的皇妃
버림 받은 황비

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Web: 145 Chapters + Prologue (Complete)
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Read the spoiler please  
by prinzpudding
July 1st, 2020, 1:35am
Rating: N/A
DON'T LEAVE JUST YET

I had to delete the whole comment just to tell you this. The one spoiler that helps me sleep soundly tonight.
Credit goes to yooyunayoo, thank you pal for your marvelous spoiler.


"LONG, DETAILED SPOILERS EXPLAINING WHY SHE ENDED UP WITH THE PRINCE"

"I know everyone is pissed that Tia ends up with Ruve after he raped her, killed her family, her unborn child, and her, but there's a reason for all that."

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So the background is, Ruve's father, the Emperor, has always been very cold and distant to him, raising him with harsh expectations and no love. The Emperor was actually in love with Tia's mom, Jeremiah. Keiran (Tia's dad) was engaged to be married with another woman (Karsein's mother actually) in a political marriage, but he also fell in love with Jeremiah.

Jeremiah was in love with Keiran, not the Emperor. The only person in the empire who can break off the official engagement between Keiran & Karsein's mom is the emperor, but obviously the emperor wants them to get married so he can hopefully marry Jeremiah. However, Keiran offers to swear an oath of absolute loyalty to the Emperor if he will give up on Jeremiah and allow Keiran to marry Jeremiah by breaking the official engagement.

The Emperor/King is actually a very just, wise man and he realizes he cannot put his own personal feelings ahead of the good of the Empire, so he gives up on his love for Jeremiah and breaks off Keiran's engagement so Keiran can marry Jeremiah and then Jeremiah gives birth to Tia.

Just some background, I'm probably mixing them up (?) but Tia's family is part of the "Aristocrats" (I think) which mainly support the Emperor and on the other side you have the "nobles" or something, which oppose the emperor. The emperor is actually not as powerful as you think, as the noble faction have basically 50% the power of the empire and the Emperor+aristocrats the other 50%. The emperor needs to ensure the aristocrat faction that supports him is unified (there's in-fighting inside both factions), which is why he wanted Keiran to swear an oath of absolute loyalty to him.

Tia has her father's coloring, but looks exactly like Jeremiah, which is why the Emperor (who was in love with Jeremiah), loves her so much and treats her like a daughter. He gives her all the love he has and gives zero love to his son. The reason is because in order to survive as Emperor, you have to be cold, logical, rational, and strong-willed. He does love prince Ruve a lot, but was perhaps misguided.

The aristocrats all have harsh expectations on Ruve to grow up to be intelligent, rational, capable so everyone is always telling him "You need to stop whining, you need to be better". On the other hand, Tia is naturally gifted and smart and everyone always says "Tia is so amazing, we love her so much!" Imagine being a young boy, growing up and seeing how everyone, including your own father, loves Tia so much and nobody gives any love to you at all. Of course he grows to resent Tia.

Only two people ever showed "love" to Ruve, which is Jeremiah and Duke Jenna/Zena (or whatever his name is, the main villain). However, when Jeremiah gets assassinated later on, she happily gives up her life to protect Tia, while ignoring Ruve (who was also in the same room), so Ruve feels betrayed that Jeremiah didn't care about him at all, which I mean, of course this woman will protect her biological daughter over the unrelated prince. Like Jeremiah rushes to Tia and covers Tia with her body, while leaving Ruve to fend for himself against the assassins.

After this, Duke Zena is the only person who shows any "love" to Prince Ruve, which is why he believes anything Zena says. Zena basically tells Ruve that Tia is an unfeeling, incredibly manipulative and intelligent woman who is out to marry him so she can get more power for her household and the aristocrat faction. Thus Ruve hates Tia even more.

Tia, on the other hand, despite being loved by everyone, also has really harsh expectations put on her and she feels she cannot show any weakness, that she must prove herself to be a capable Empress. She actually does have trouble expressing her feelings which is why Zena's whole "she has no feelings" rings true to Ruve. However, through her actions, Tia proves that she cares deeply about the Empire, her household, and even Ruve.

However, one day Ji-Eun magically appears and is denoted the "child of god" and the one who is supposed to be empress. Ji-Eun is basically an average Korean 16 year old girl. Imagine getting thrown into a game of thrones setting at 16. She lost her friends and family and is completely alone in the new world. Zena tells Ji-Eun about all the s**t that goes down and basically says "If you don't manage to get Prince Ruve's support, you will probably get raped and killed cause the politics here are deadly". He also tells Ji-Eun "Ruve is desperate for love, so just be happy and smiling and tell him you love him". So Ji-Eun, terrified for her life, does everything she can to seduce Ruve and he falls in love with her because she is "honest" with her feelings and "innocent".

Thus Tia becomes the "abandoned empress" and Ji-Eun the actual empress. Ji-Eun now gets to enjoy a life of luxury and wealth, while Tia does all the official Empress duties as the "Queen". The Empire is thriving and everyone thinks "Life is so good and our Empress is such a wonderful, kind, happy person, while that b***h Tia thinks she's so much better than everyone. She always acting so stuck up."

NOW THE IMPORTANT PART. Zena's plans are in motion and he wants even more power, so he begins to poison Ruve with a psychotropic drug that makes him angry, bipolar, and schizophrenic. He also feeds lies to Ruve and Ruve hears the people+staff... basically everyone saying how Tia is a total smug, superior b***h who is power-hungry and pissed off her plans to get power failed cause Ji-Eun showed up. There are rumors that Tia wants to assassinate Ji-Eun so she can get back the place of Empress.

Ruve confronts Tia and wants her to be honest with him, but she basically thinks "I'm scared of you, I cannot be honest with you" and tells him "you won't believe me anyway" and Ruve goes "So you're basically admitting all the rumors about you are true." Now don't forget he is drugged with those psychotropic drugs, so that's when he rapes her. And of course, he later pushes her and causes her to miscarry.

He does feel extremely guilty about this, but when Tia finds out she miscarried and can no longer have children (her womb is damaged), she laughs crazily in front of many maids/servants, basically cursing god (Vita) for her life. Zena and the palace staff report that Tia laughed like crazy, saying "I'm so glad I don't have to give birth to that f**ker's baby. Thank god I had a miscarriage". Of course Ruve gets pissed off at this and thinks what kind of monster is happy her baby died. Thus Tia just confirmed all the rumors about her.

Tia's father, Keiran, understands Tia is unhappy and miserable and begs Ruve to take Tia away. He wants to fake her death and have her live quietly in another country. At the same time, Zena fakes an assassination on Ji-Eun and blames Tia for it, but Ruve has some moments of clarity. He thinks "If Tia wants to escape to another country, why would she risk killing Ji-Eun? The only point in killing Ji-Eun is if Tia wants to stay and become Empress."

I'm kind of confused too with the novel/webtoon, but I think there's not enough evidence to tie Tia + Keiran + her house into the assassination attempt, but Ruve & Tia fight and he lies to her that he killed her father, because he wants to hurt her in retaliation for her laughing that their unborn child died. Tia, who was also poisoned by Duke Zena, goes crazy upon hearing her father was killed and stabs Ruve. Of course, now there is enough evidence that Tia committed treason, attempted assassination of the Emperor, so Zena and everyone votes to have her executed. Ruve actually votes against them but is outvoted. He only wants Tia banished to another country. He was actually trying to grant her wish to escape the palace. He was setting her free.

However, Tia is executed and dies thinking Ruve had killed her father and sentenced her to death when none of that actually happened.

Anyway, now that Tia is gone, Ruve continues to get crazier after being poisoned with the drugs, Zena causes unrest in the Empire by continuing to gather more power, and Ji-Eun must now do all of Tia's duties. How can you expect a modern 16-21 year old girl to run an Empire? Ji-Eun makes a ton of dumb decisions and that with all the other crazy going on means the Empire goes to ruins.

All the people that used to praise Ji-Eun and say "Tia is so smug and unlikable" suddenly turn on Ji-Eun. Suddenly everyone says "Ji-Eun is such a dumbass. How can anyone be so dumb? She's probably faking dumb and is actually evil and wants us to all suffer and die. Nobody can be THAT dumb. When Tia was Queen, she was so smart and the Empire was thriving." Basically everyone regretted tr*shing Tia and wished she were still alive and the Empress.

Ji-Eun is devastated that suddenly everyone turned on her and one day Ruve finally tells her, after another dumb decision, "Why are you so dumb? I wish you had died and Tia was Empress". Ji-Eun also gets pregnant at this time and feels so alone and powerless and worried about the future of her baby.

Ruve has figured out at this time that Zena is not his "father figure" but was actually poisoning him and that everything about Tia was a lie. For instance, Ji-Eun keeps saying she loves him but after 5 (?) years together, has no idea what his favorite/disliked foods are, whereas Tia figured it out within a couple of weeks. Tia also took so much pressure off him by handling many Empire matters for him, whereas Ji-Eun actually stresses him out with more work with her dumb decisions. He realizes Tia loved him and showed it through actions, just not words, while Ji-Eun's words were empty and hollow and betrayed by her careless actions.

Ruve also realizes that he is dead soon, especially if Ji-Eun gives birth to a son, since Zena will kill him and then assume the role of "regent", while raising and brainwashing the baby who will one day inherit the empire. Ruve has a way to save his life by killing Ji-Eun and he considers it, but realizes that killing her + the unborn child will be doing the same thing to her what he did to Tia, something he regrets with all his heart. And in case you forgot, he actually wanted to save her life and send her away from the empire, just Zena + the nobles were too powerful and ordered Tia executed. I think the webtoon actually portrayed this badly since they showed Ruve kind of with a superior/unfeeling look on his face while she was executed, when in reality he wanted to spare her.

So he instead realizes he's lost and Zena will now take over the Empire, so he gives up on being Emperor and tries to run away, but Zena gets wind of this and sends soldiers to assassinate Ruve. Ruve falls down a cliff and as he lies dying, he gazes up at the moon (the king is the sun and the moon symbolizes the queen/empress) and he thinks the moon is Tia and basically begs her for forgiveness and thinks death is not so bad since he will be reunited with Tia.

This is all background and Tia gets sent back in time, of course.

SECOND TIMELINE

This time, Tia realizes she should be more "open" with her feelings and she's not actually alone, there's so many people who support her and love her. Don't forget she also thought her father was somewhat "unfeeling" but realized he risked his life and household to make her happy. He begged Ruve to fake her death and let her live quietly in another country, showing how much he actually loved her.

Thus 2nd timeline (2TL) Tia shows her emotions more and Ruve, seeing Tia showing all these emotions and laughing with Karsein + Allen, realizes she is not unfeeling and cold. Also, don't forget that Tia inheriting her household makes it impossible for her to become Empress (due to some rules and stuff), so how can Tia be power-hungry and out to manipulate him, Ruve, when she appears to want to break off the engagement? Thus 2nd timeline (2TL) Ruve realizes a lot of what Zena said about Tia was a lie.

Oh, and BIG SPOILER ABOUT ALLEN, but Allen, despite being much more capable than his brother, is passed over in favor of his older brother. Allen wants to inherit the household, thinking he is better than his brother, but the parents think it's unfair, since the oldest son is supposed to inherit. Even though Allen is definitely better, the oldest son is capable still. Allen thinks this means his parents don't really love him and he gets driven to Zena's side as a spy.

Allen also is sociopathic and possessive of Tia. At one point, he considers killing her father, Keiran, because Keiran sees through Allen's true nature. He also kind of has an erot*c daydream about strangling Tia to death so she will always be his. His other plot is to kidnap Tia and keep her locked up in a secret house forever, so she will belong to him only.

However, he does have a moment of clarity where he realizes he is f**ked up in the head and he double-crosses Zena to the current Emperor, who sends Allen away to another country, but thanks him for realizing the error of his ways.

So Allen did love Tia enough to realize his love for her was messed up and psychotic. He willingly went away to protect Tia from himself.

Ruve falls in love with Tia because of how expressive and lively she is in the second timeline, and also because, if you've forgotten, he loved Jeremiah (Tia's mother) because only Jeremiah + Zena ever showed him love +affection, and Tia resembles Jeremiah.

After Ruve died in the first timeline, Ji-Eun gives birth to a girl, who cannot inherit the throne and with Ruve dead, it means the royal lineage is broken. Zena can now over take the throne legally, so he decides to kill Ji-Eun and stabs her and her baby daughter to death.

Ji-Eun b****es to god/Vita about how unfair her life was and Vita (God) offers Ji-Eun a choice. She can send Ji-Eun back to modern day Korea with her memories completely erased, or she can send Ji-Eun back to the moment she arrived in the Abandoned Empress world with her memories intact.

Ji-Eun does miss Korea + her family, but don't forget this choice came literally 10 seconds after she got stabbed in the stomach by her "friend" Duke Zena. Ji-Eun hates Ruve for abandoning her ("I wish Tia was alive and you were dead instead"), hates Zena for manipulating and killing her, and most of all, hates that Tia took everyone's love even in death. Remember, after the Empire started to crumble, the people and Ruve all said they regretted how they treated Tia and wished she was the Empress and said Ji-Eun was dumb tr*sh.

Ji-Eun also thinks if she runs away to Korea with her memories erased, it means admitting to herself she lost to Tia, that she is and will always be inferior to Tia. She thinks if she actually works hard she can match Tia and become a powerful empress who can take revenge on Prince Ruve + Duke Zena. Thus in her anger and pride, she chooses to relive a second life instead of going back home to Korea.

When Ji-Eun arrives this time, she does everything she can to seduce Ruve because she wants to make him fall in love with her so she can then toss him aside and destroy him, the Empire, and Zena.

But at this point Ruve only loves Tia and none of Ji-Eun's attempts work. So she instead asks Zena to adopt her, so she can have the aristocrat backing and become Empress. Her second goal, of course, is to spy on Zena and find out his weakness so she can kill him.

Zena though is smart and while he wants to manipulate Ji-Eun and make her Empress, doesn't trust Ji-Eun at all. By the way, Ji-Eun has a special power where she can heal flowers/plants, just not humans. Tia's power from God is that she can hear Vita's voice/holy messages, just like some priests can.

Anyway, yada yada, s**t happens and then one day Tia gets stabbed and almost dies, but Ji-Eun who finally realizes that neither Ruve nor Tia are the true villains, begs God to save Tia's life and Vita/God tells Ji-Eun she can save Tia by giving up her magical powers and losing her status as a "child of god". Ji-Eun willingly does so and Tia's life is saved.

Ji-Eun works with Ruve + Tia to bring down Zena and Zena does get judged for his crimes and his whole household is beheaded and killed.

Ji-Eun saw herself as a protagonist in an isekai novel, thinking that she was the main character and Tia was the villainess out to steal her position and love, but realized in the end, she was actually the villainess. This is why she saves Tia's life, because she wants redemption. She also regrets so much not taking Vita/God's offer to go back to Korea with her memories erased.

Ruve and everyone else in the Empire wants to kill Ji-Eun, since she is a co-conspirator and Zena's adopted daughter, but Tia begs them for mercy, however, Tia is overruled, just like first timeline Ruve was overruled when he asked for clemency for Tia.

Tia visits Ji-Eun in prison and asks why Ji-Eun hated her so much and why Ji-Eun decided to save her. Ji-Eun tells Tia "I was supposed to be the protagonist, I was supposed to be loved and have a happily ever after, but even in death you stole that from me. Ruve & the people told me they loved you more and that I was useless tr*sh. You have everything that I don't have."

At this point Tia gets pissed and goes "WTF. Ruve + the people executed me and treated me like tr*sh for years. How can you be jealous of me?"

At this point Ji-Eun goes "Be honest, you looked down on me."

And Tia does admit she looked down on Ji-Eun as being dumb and incompetent and was upset that Ruve + the people loved her despite Ji-Eun being a dumb Empress.

The girls both find it ironic they envied the other.

At this point Tia gives Ji-Eun an option, which Ruve agreed to. She gives Ji-Eun two bottles, one with real poison and one with a Romeo+Juliet poison that will fake death. Ji-Eun can choose to die or she can be smuggled away to another country and live there quietly for the rest of her life.

Tia tells Ji-Eun "this is your choice" and then walks away and you never find out what choice Ji-Eun chose but in side stories I think it says she chose to live.

Tia & Ruve get married and have 2 daughters + 1 son. The daughter inherits the Marquess household while the son becomes the greatest Emperor in the history of the Empire.

Vita had originally said the "blessed child of god" would bring eternal happiness to the empire, but in the first timeline, the empire crumbled due to Zena and everyone (including Zena) lost. In the second timeline, they all lived happily ever after, except Zena + ji-Eun. Since Ji-Eun gave up her powers, Tia is the only "child of god" in the second timeline. Also, Ji-Eun eventually comes to peace with her life and lives a quiet, but fulfilled life as an ordinary person in another country. Kind of bittersweet she never got to see her Korea family again, but that was her choice and she has to live with it.


... Last updated on July 1st, 2020, 3:56am
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I lost precious brain cells reading this  
by Lourie
January 3rd, 2021, 11:57am
Rating: 2.0  / 10.0
I've already posted my detailed reviews of this story here, here, and here. Thought I'd share these here, as well.

As someone who was physically and mentally abused by the person who I thought I "loved", and has read a shit ton of literary works about victims of PTSD, I must say I have never been this angry at a webtoon before.

I'll be focusing on chapters 7-68, where the FL unrealistically goes from "I'm fucking terrified of the ML" to "Yeah I guess we're cool now. Let's talk about flowers, hm?" My focus is Tia and Tia only. Beware this will be detailed and long af. Bear with me.

Stop reading if you don't wanna see spoilers.

The first two times she meets the ML, she's scared shitless. She freezes, is unable to talk, etc. Understandable reaction. Moving on.

The third time, she bumps into him and goes, "He must be mad at me. Why isnt he mad at me?" "Why do you always look at me with resentment and hatred?" All she thinks about is him, him, him, him. Girl why don't you ask yourself if you're okay with meeting your killer?! Why do you have to keep wondering about him? Aren't you the victim here?

In ch. 25 during a play, ML agrees that Tia looked cute the other day, and she blushes. Yep, if my torturer said I looked cute I'd definitely blush too, instead of puking my guts out. Then, after the falling chandelier accident, she thinks, "Are we not meant to be together after all?" Is she... is she mentally retarded? Or is she really just that dumb? God himself told her that she's the wrong choice so why is she still-

Anyway, moving on. In ch. 34, he escorts her home and she thinks, "Why? I thought he hated me?" When he leaves, she wonders, "Why do I feel so empty? Perhaps he escorted me because he was worried about me." I shit you not. I'm this 🤏 close to throwing my phone against the wall.

Ma'am did you perhaps lose your brain cells after getting sent back in time? I wonder how such a thought even CROSSES her mind. She should be fantasizing about shooting arrows into his body, not that bullshit. Keep in mind this is only their fifth meeting.

In ch. 43 at the ML's coming of age party, she stands right next to him and links arms with him. She doesn't even think twice about it. Wow. One would think that being in such close proximity with one's torturer will make one feel nauseous at the very least. But nuh-uh. Not our MC. She looks just fine, nothing to worry about. She's already at that stage of healing where she doesn't mind being near him and touching him. We love fast development, don't we?

Later, she goes outside and says, "It's suffocating." Oh FINALLY!! Does this mean she doesn't actually like being near him, after all? I thought she'd already overcome her trauma. I guess I was wrong, phew. But then she follows up with, "I feel nauseous....... from the crowd."

Pardon?🙂 So being in close proximity with her torturer/killer doesn't suffocate her but the room does? Has she lost her damn mind?🙂

In ch. 52 when he visits her castle, she serves him his favorite food and drinks. Why? Why is she like this? Who the FUCK- Who in their right mind would VOLUNTARILY serve their torturer, killer of their child, with their favorite food (unless it's laced with poison)? Honestly, I'm starting to think Tia is the crazy one, not the ML.

Then, ML triggers her PTSD. She's unresponsive for some time, has a dream about her past and present, wakes up, reads a letter from Allen that says, "Please don't trap yourself in the past only to neglect the present. I know how wise you are, so I know you can overcome this." Nice words, really.

Tia is like, "Oh wow true!!! I guess I'm different now?? I'm okay😎" I truly envy how easy it is for her to be okay again after she's just had an "episode". Look, I'm not saying that she should dwell in her depression and all. I'm just saying: I wish it was that easy in real life.

And now we finally get to chapter 68, where she meets the ML again after some time. This is their eighth encounter (she's 14/15 now). Last time they met, he triggered her PTSD. Now? She has no such concerns like, What if the same thing happens again? What if after all this time, I still can't stand him? What if the progress I've made this far means nothing? None of that happens. She only feels a bit awkward and agrees to go on a walk with him. Instead of being wary and on guard around him, she just casually chats with him like old friends, talking about flowers. Yes, flowers. No shit.

I remember I was so confused reading this. I checked to see if maybe I had missed a few chapters? Did I unknowingly skip her character growth? Why is she acting normal around him now? How-

All right. Try to calm down, brain.

If you say, "Yea but the ML is different tho? He's not the same person. It's like two different people entirely. Plus, he's still a child." My God, IT DOESN'T MATTER! What matters most is how the author tried to potray how PTSD works but failed miserably because she probably did the bare minimum of research and cared more about plot and fucking romance than character development. Let's put ourselves in Tia's shoes:
1. She doesn't know that past ML had constantly been poisoned with psychotic drugs.
2. She doesn't know that present ML is starting to slowly "change for the better". Only us readers know that, because we've seen his pov.

Repeat: SHE DOESN'T KNOW SHIT. All she knows is: this dude, no matter how young he is presently, was the one who killed her unborn baby, her father, and her. His face alone is a constant reminder that he was the one who raped, psychologically tortured, and thought she was worse than dirt for years with no regret whatsoever. Period. So it drives me absolutely insane why she would treat him so kindly.

You may argue that "it took years for her to get to that point." Okay then. We're talking four, five years at most?
1. During that time, did she ever consult with an expert or an adult on how to properly deal with her horrible past? No. She could've easily used "I keep having this horrible nightmare, could you please help me?" as an excuse to get someone to help her one way or another, but she didn't.

2. Next, "she can overcome it because she has a strong support system." Tell me, how many people know about Tia's past life? Allen, her Dad, and the ML. Allen (a psycho teen) straight up didn't trust her at first, her Dad basically only says, "You're strong for overcoming that," then there is no more conversation about it. Case closed. As for the ML, he knows not because Tia trusts him enough to tell him everything, but because the little shit read a personal letter from Tia's close friend. Did he perhaps skip all his etiquette lessons growing up? He may be the future Emperor, but he has no fucking right to do that. He and Tia are basically strangers. He does not deserve to know about her trauma without her fucking consent, just because he's cUriOuS why she doesn't seem to like him.

Also, guess what? His advisor also knows the contents of that VERY PRIVATE LETTER. Marvelous🙂 How nice of him🙂 I'm amazed🙂 It took her years to gather the courage to tell the truth to her two loved ones, yet now he knows everything too. I am so pissed off. No wonder the Emperor always compares him to Tia, he's an idiot.

While it is true that having a support system helps a whole lot in overcoming one's trauma, in Tia's case, who exactly has helped her deal with her past trauma? Every time someone asks if she's okay, she lies and says that she is. Is that what you call healing? Being helped by the people around you? I agree with this person's statement:
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You can argue Tia has a support system but having people around you isn't equal to getting the help you need. I agree she talks to her father about what happened but it's just one step. Plus talking isn't equal to therapy.

Original comment here.

3. And how about exposure treatment? How many times has she interacted with the ML up to ch. 68? Eight, ladies and gentlemen.
• First three times, she's scared.
• Fourth time, she turns into a blushing maiden because he calls her cute (Uh, what?).
• Fifth time, she feels empty when he leaves her and wonders if he's worried about her (Again, wha-?).
• Sixth time, she's okay with being near him. 10/10. No problemo.
• Seventh time, she has an "episode", triggered by the one and only ML.
• Eighth time, they're okay. A bit awkward, but they talk about flowers which is nice, isn't it?🙂

Phew. So, she received no counseling/help from any adult (except her Dad), only spoke about her past twice, always said "I'm fine" when asked, yet somehow, suddenly, she's now okay with chatting casually with the ML? Great. Fantastic character development. Superb writing.

The author didn't see fit to include small yet important developments like:
"I can now look him in the eye without feeling terrified."
"I can be in the same room as him without wanting to pull my hair out."
"I can stand close to him without feeling repulsed."
"I can look at his face without being reminded of how badly he mistreated me in the past."


We don't see that kind of development, do we?

1st ML was literally Tia's entire world, her one and only, yet she was constantly dragged through the dirt by him, psychologically tortured, raped, told her baby wasn't worth shit (despite not having been born yet), and had a miscarriage because of him. He then manipulated her into thinking that he'd killed her dad and forced her to surrender the ONE THING left she held high at that time, her pride. He mentally crucified her, again and again.

All that, and she was only 17 years old.

Please, please tell me how you expect me to believe that this teenage girl dealt with this kind of trauma and abuse and hatred in just a few years, with barely any help? The story would've been far better if the author had elaborated more on Tia dealing with her trauma instead of bombarding us with THREE potential love interests right from the beginning.

Again I say: IT👏DOESN'T👏FUCKING👏MATTER👏 IF THE ML IN 1ST AND 2ND LIVES ARE DIFFERENT. It's utterly ridiculous how the author wrote the worst fate that a woman (in this case, a GIRL) could possibly endure, yet somehow in ch. 68 she's already all cool and talking about flowers with her abuser. Did the author really expect me to buy that?

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Her trauma is made front and centre for a while and brushed under the rug the next.

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True. Let's talk a bit about Allen. Do you know that scene in ch. 22 where he towers and leans over her? You see, the ML had done the exact same thing to her right before raping her. I'm just really curious why she doesn't push him away or get flashbacks of her traumatic past or something. Instead she just stands there, completely unbothered. Author, please explain? Did you write this scene because you thought it'd look hot and chicks dig it? Did you forget your main character has PTSD? Bish I am done😔✋

Like I said before: The author tried to potray how PTSD works but failed miserably because she probably did the bare minimum of research and cared more about plot and fucking romance than character development.

I wouldn't recommend reading this. Better skip it. Save your time and brain.

... Last updated on April 12th, 2021, 11:54pm
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Why? Why is this story about a victim of abuse going back to her abuser?  
by veokye
June 24th, 2020, 7:49am
Rating: 2.0  / 10.0
Nah but seriously, despite the decent art, the only question I have is WHY did the first 6 chapters exist? They are the bane of this entire story. Because they exist, they cannot be ignored and turn the story from simple cliche to astoundingly horrendous idea.


FAIR WARNING: Spoilers ahead so stop reading here if you want to not be spoiled. I am not marking it as a spoiler since that would blot out the whole thing and I need to get into spoiler territory. I am at chapter 26 -- past that there will be no spoilers but seriously, get yourself spoiled and don't bother reading this dumpster fire.

This is a story so the storyteller has control over what is and is not revealed. That means that it wasn't necessary for the ML to be a jackass, rape the FL, force her to lose her child, make life a living hell for hell, kill her father, psychologically torment her into losing her mind, attack him and then have her executed.

It didn't need to happen, but it did. This isn't a matter of "but that was practically another person" but rather a matter of "who in their right mind could possibly overcome the years of trauma they endured and still grow to like that person?"

The author decided to go over the top with the Prince who becomes an outright villain. Not a misguided anti-villain, hero, flawed fool or in any way redeemable. Rape, forced abortion, mental torture and murder is pretty much what he does in the first few chapters and I'd go so far as saying that that's not redeemable.

He's not under another's influence, being mind controlled or replaced by an alien from dimension WTF (as far as we can tell) but rather is a man in a position of power who hates a woman so much he imprisons her in his house, forces her to do his wife's work, rapes her (HAVE I f*ckING MENTIONED THE RAPE?) kills her unborn child (might be sharing this one with another), her father and then her and not because SHE wronged him in any way, but because he really liked her mommy and her mommy died in childbirth with the EXPRESS LAST WISH OF TAKING CARE OF HER DAUGHTER INSTEAD OF RAPING HER!

I can't let go of the rape because that is just f*cking gratuitous and unnecessary. Most of the prologue is gratuitous and unnecessary -- story could start with the girl being executed and move from there -- but think on WHY would making him a rapist be needed -- it's not, for any reason. Neither is the forced abortion or the other unspeakable acts. Just make it a matter of politics and indifference on the Prince's part and he's redeemable but if anyone expects a f*cking villain to be redeemable simply on the grounds of "well but that's not him anymore" then they need to understand that the temperament and psychology needed to create a Monster was there well in advance of him actually going through with it. Him being redeemed doesn't mean that he should stay the main focus of the story or have any single point of impact on the heroine's life who is the biggest problem with this story, along with the author.

The heroine, after going through so many things at the hands of the f*cking Monster Lead, after meeting again and having some posttraumatic stress rendering her unable to function on their first meeting, apparently goes through exposure treatment and overcomes this to the point where, later on, during a play where her disastrous future is alluded to by the cosmos itself, instead of going "well f*cking obviously that will happen, I'm not chasing that dick, no matter how royal it is, after IT RAPED ME" goes all "well, I know he RAPED ME, but is like, the cosmos saying that this is perhaps an omen that we're not meant to be?" YES YOU f*ckING IDIOT! DID THE RAPE AND MURDER NOT f*ckING CLUE YOU IN TO THIS?

I get angry at this point --- this is when I come here to see if maybe I'm the one losing my mind and other people see something I'm missing... looking for other perspectives I see that there are people seeing the same as me but also people who are defending this. Look.... tastes are non-negotiable. You like what you like... but there is a point where art quality cannot trump writing quality.

This f*cking idiotic lead is currently still considering the option that she might get together with the Prince when any normal human would be having violent seizures and throwing up in the mere presence of a creature as vile. Yeah, he's not done that shit YET, but therein lies the problem: he could still become that person. A piece of shit Monster who destroys a woman's life so completely, murders the last remaining kin she has and forces her to lose her f*cking mind depending on God to turn back time just to survive, all for the atrocious sin of HAVING BEEN BORN, after living her life being taught and told THAT HER ONLY GOAL IN LIFE IS TO BE HIS WIFE... I just... How does that even compute?

My problem is that being a narrative, the prologue didn't need to be that extreme. I get you wanted to get your cold Prince cliche going but going so far is insane. The message being sent, as mentioned by some other reviewer is also not just harmful but excruciatingly toxic: live your life to be this man's wife, get betrayed, become a second-string concubine, get used by his actual wife to do HER job, raped, used and abused, lose your father and your mind because of him and when you have a chance to escape all of that, try giving him another shot because he's a changed man and surely he won't do the same things again! The f*cking universe literally comes in and tells her that this is a mistake, they were never meant to be and she still does it. This is not triumphant, it's sick.

As for the writing, with allowances made for translation errors and losses from the original Korean to English, it is poor in general with, as stated, unbelievable characters all around:

1. The Idiot Lead, who I've already gone over, who must be a stealth masochist;

2. The Monster Lead, the f*cking rapist who could do with a few hundred swords running him through for that authentic Middle Ages look;

3. The father who only after his daughter spends a good amount of time playing slave to the Monster and his piece of ass does he think to maybe help her out then goes and promptly gets himself executed - in present time he's the cliche'd stoic father who doesn't know how to communicate with his baby girl;

4. Harem boy #1, a green haired idiot who is so "perfect" that he's suspicious from day one -- this one is extremely important because it tells a lot about what is considered "sweet" in the author's eyes. The guy comes in one day and within the first 10 minutes proposes to a 10 year old (he's 13, that's not the issue) because, according to his genius intellect, if he doesn't marry her, then she'll be the ruin of her house and nobody will want her... what a noble man and kind character...So basically a manipulative piece of shit

5. Harem boy #2, haven't read that far yet as I stopped at that Opera scene and am not going further because I want to not lose that much more hope in the human race, but he seems like an "energetic and honest boy" to counter the cooler headed Monster and manipulative asshole. Might be decent, prolly not, he's definitely not getting in the Idiot Lead's pants; that's reserved for the rapist

6. A knight-dude -- this dude is not a main character and has a name but I refuse to remember it. The reason I'm mentioning this one is a single scene: he goes to the Idiot Lead and tells her that Harem#1 (the green one) should be avoided at all costs and that since his family is in a different branch of his government, it's possible that he'll ultimately betray the idiot. Aside from the whole "no-f*cking-duh she'll be betrayed, what the f*ck is even wrong with this 10 year old chasing so much dick directly after losing her child, family, home, mind and life in that order and being told by God itself that her entire life up to that point was a mistake and that she was never meant to be who she thought she was, i.e the Monster's wife rather than his victim" there is also the matter of this moment coming f*ckING 4 MONTHS AFTER THE 2 FIRST SHOWED THEMSELVES AS BEING FRIENDS TO THE ENTIRE f*ckING HOUSEHOLD. Been f*cking sitting on that sage advice for a while, haven't you Ser Dumbf*ck?

7. The current emperor(or king, whatever), father to Monster, who is apparently aware of the tremors the 10 year old goes in when in he same room as his son (might wanna look into that, Your Highness) so, of course, during the aforementioned Opera scene, separates the Idiot Lead from her father and places her on his left while Monster is on his right... f*ckING WISE LEADER THERE, NOT AFRAID OF PERPETUATING THIS PROPHECY BULLSHIT THAT PUTS THE BURDEN OF SAVING THE KINGDOM ON THE SHOULDERS OF f*ckING PRETEENS, PINNACLE OF LEADERSHIP AND RESPONSIBILITY THIS ONE!

8. The Idiot from another world (not using her name, henceforth referred to as "Obviously Liar" ) - literally her point in the story is to be an airhead idiot who doesn't do anything but pretend to be the Idiot Lead's friend even while stealing her purpose in life, place in the palace, free time, dignity etc. She also loses her child during the prologue, at the exact right time as the Idiot Lead, creating another situation where the Monster abandons the Idiot Lead for the Liar except no she doesn't, she's just jealous, faked the pregnancy, likely gave the order for the special abortion tea to be served to the Idiot Lead and is using the opportunity to get her jollies by taking the Monster's attention away from their victim. In other words: another Monster, more subtle, Monster Lead's in-canon's OTP as ordained by God (not even joking about this one); likely the reason for the Monster's slide into total lunacy but I am not placing the blame on her - if there was no soil in which to plant the seeds, he wouldn't have blossomed into such a gigantic tree of rape and hatred.

9. The Idiot Lead's dead, decomposing mother gets a special callout here despite being the only character that is even somewhat likable (except maybe the father) which is no doubt due to the 4-7 panels of showtime she's had in the story, most time silhouetted. Why? Well her intentions are clearly good and wishes to both help the traumatized Monster Lead and hopes for the Idiot Lead's best but manages through >HER SIMPLE EXISTENCE< ensure that Monster Lead grows into a hateful piece of shit who hates, violates and victimizes her daughter who he was asked specifically by her to keep safe, AND ensure that her daughter, who she instructs the prin--Monster to protect, by mere virtue of giving birth to her and then f*cking off to the afterlife, lives through what can only be considered a life consisting of first 17 years of wasted time, learning to be an Empress (or Queen, whatever) and then a further x years of abuse, mental and physical... and rape, lest we forget.
She is the single most amazing character I have ever borne witness to: existing to create an ironic twist in the story while at the same time having the story twist itself into and ironic, over the top drama, thus birthing the "irony pretzel" as I like to call it. She's like a singularity of failure...
... If I'd read further she probably would have been revealed to have been a child molester who abused the Monster for years which led to him becoming the f*ckwit we all know and... apparently some still don't dislike, for some reason despite being a conniving murderer and rapist.

I read 26 chapters of this trainwreck and I have learned to hate it. I've been on a binge of "resurrection shoujo webtoons" these past weeks and enjoyed a bunch of them enormously, even some that have similarities with what this one was SUPPOSED to be. Cold Male lead who softens up? Yeah, that's fine. Innocent or otherwise kindly (or doormat at times) Female Lead who warms up the ML's heart? Got that too, no problem. People do change, I agree. But those stories never had the insane amount of abuse, unjustified at that, that this story does. They also took care to ensure that the leads actually were redeemable and that they were also consistent, e.g a prince that seems cruel and murderous is only doing it because a war is ongoing etc.

But this... this is on another level. Whereas those stories do have all the regular cliches and a lot of trouble on their own, the general message they have is: things can get better and if you have a chance to change things for the better you should take it.I don't much like the "cold prince" cliche but it seems to be everywhere and ultimately I do see the attraction in observing character development of a character that is outwardly cold and cynical into a "warm and caring individual" who only displays those qualities to the woman he loves -- it's not the best and perpetuates stereotypes that shouldn't be perpetuated, but... hey, at least they're not rapists.

And I cannot believe I just typed that.

Final thoughts:

- Male (Monster) lead is irredeemable after the first 6 chapters - if that was to be avoided, the writer needed to consider taking things down a notch. Instead we went with full rapist and murderer lead and that just isn't gonna cut it... and by it I don't mean the Idiot Lead's head because he definitely gone and do that! Likely only redeeming quality: putting Idiot Lead out of her misery.
- Female (Idiot) lead is an idiot; talks to literal God and says she doesn't believe in God anymore after she returned 7 f*cking years in the past with said God's help. That's gratitude for you! Also entertains thoughts of letting her rapist come back inside for a drink when most women in that position would be on the side doing the penetrating... with a sword... that she took up supposedly so she doesn't marry the Monster... so I don't know what the f*ck is wrong with her.
- Writing is banal and cliche; there are dozens of other manhwa out there with better written leads and plots... also less rape.
- Characterization is... well read the first 2 points above to tell you about the 2 main characters and you'll get a feel about it: muddied, disjointed, unbelievable and aggressively offensive for anyone with the capacity of seeing the characters' actions in perspective
- Message, as I mentioned, is literally "live your life to be this man's wife, get betrayed, raped, used and abused, lose your father and your mind because of him and when you have a chance to escape all of that, try giving him another shot because he's a changed man and surely he won't do the same things again" -- I cannot stress this enough but this is the classic and most basic abuse victim mentality that leads to IRL deaths! This may be a fantasy story but this is not something that should be put into anyone's mind! It's f*ckING TOXIC and honestly disgusting.

It's honestly funny how I have read other works where the characters were written to be the most vile and disgusting ones possible, even the main ones, and yet this is one of the few who has garnered such hate from me and most definitely the one who garnered it in the shortest amount of time. Author needs to stop fantasizing about abuse and how "everyone can change" and understand that while that is true and people can change, that doesn't mean they shouldn't suffer some consequences for it. Monster Lead might be an alternate universe version of the one who did those horrendous actions, but the fact that Idiot Lead barely even seems to care about it after living through, dying and then having God intervene on her behalf to give her a second chance is the gravest problem of all. In perspective: this means that everything the Idiot Lead went through was ABSOLUTELY NECESSARY in order for her to go back and put into effect the chain of events that would "redeem" the asshole.

That's not redemption for the Male Lead; it's just damnation for the work itself.

Do not bother!
2/10 for pretty art -- I at least respect the artist who had to endure this shit and put this garbage into form and color.

... Last updated on June 24th, 2020, 12:18pm
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Truly an Epic Garbage  
by DimensionBreaker
October 7th, 2020, 10:38pm
Rating: 1.0  / 10.0
It's been a while since I first read 'The Abandoned Empress'. Instantly I was attracted to its potential. But that was then. Now, thinking of it makes me sigh on the best of days, and wish it were a piñata I could beat to breaking point on worse ones.

My brain can hardly function well enough on a regular day to properly word what reading this was like; I instead use that time to consume more fulfilling media that doesn't make me feel ill will towards their irresponsible creators. Because this truly is a narrative that came about as the result of derelict creation. Since today is a day I feel reasonably present and focused, allow me to explain what I mean by that statement. Spoiler warnings hereon.

Before we begin, let me clarify that I had no horse in this race. The moment Allen was revealed to be an obsessive maniac, I could see where the narrative would lead, and to whom exactly. Once you've read enough, tropes, even the ones that bear red flags, become increasingly apparent. It's a shame I could never come to truly care for Carsein, he would've been a healthier fit, but I knew that his affections were doomed already. Perhaps that colored my affection for him.

We're all familiar with the general complaints most people have with this manhwa (bad pacing, poorly written cookie-cutter side characters, unresolved plotlines, etc) so I will skip over them. My review is centered around the three 'primary' characters of this story, Aristia (tia), Ruvellis (Ruve), and Jieun. This is because although it initially sets itself up to be a coming of age/into oneself story, TAE eventually plays into its wish to be a character-driven romance.

A creator is as a creator does. Four years after Ruve's birth Vita first created Jieun, her blessed child, and through an Oracle made her out to be Ruve's perfect partner. The prophecy was the accepted truth, for everything divine is correct, and the will of the creator is above all. And Then. Vita let their blessed child fall through the dimensions into another world. Humans, unknowing of their God's folly, thus sought for a girl of suitable position and age and decided that she was the prophecized child, and so began the miserable tale of Tia's first life.

What happened next can be relearned through the first six chapters of this manhwa, and is painful to read and garners the utmost sympathy for Tia. We learn she's been brought up with a strict education to become an empress, been married to and hated by the person she loved, relegated to a secondary position after the child foretold by the oracle fell into their world, neglected, abused, assaulted (more on this later), become pregnant, lost her child, heard of the demise of her father and then executed. We learn of all her grief and wish better for her.

My favorite moment from this manhwa comes soon after when Tia visits the temple in chapter 9 and confront Vita. Tia learns that the only reason she loved Ruve despite all his neglect and cruelty was because of her string of fate, and the way it accidentally got entangled with his (more on this later). In both despair and righteous anger, Tia calls their God cruel and professes to renounce her faith, promises to reject and discard Vita the same way she was discarded by them. Vita accepts it all, because it's one of two times they've acted responsibly towards the lives of our three primary characters, and declares Tia to be a child who forges their path, bequeaths the name 'pioneer'. It is an emotional and creative high point, one that the rest of the story completely goes on to shit upon.

Since the manhwa centers itself around Tia, we concentrate on her circumstances and her experiences. We understand her trauma, willingness to move on and grow as a person, and wanting to inherit her family title. We root for her. But we're not nearly done with the first timeline.

Jieun is a 16 y/o girl thrown into an unknown world, burdened with the destiny of a 'chosen one'. Duke Jenna, the primary antagonist of the series, manipulates her into believing that having Ruve love her is the only way she can survive. She expects monogamy (as most people in modern times do) and does not get it. She is thrust into a position of power and saddled with responsibilities she has no experience handling (let's be real, a 16 y/o with mere 4 years of education added thereafter cannot handle statecraft the way a girl who has been brought up her whole life learning how to can). With the death of Tia, her husband grows increasingly angry and neglectful and she is constantly compared to and found lacking against the erstwhile queen and reprimanded for her incompetence. Everybody speaks of the special girl with the happy ending, but no one thinks of what comes thereafter. In the end, she dies with her newborn daughter, and carries the pain of a world that believes her to be God's chosen child, but fails to give her any support system to live by.

Ruve grows up in the shadow of a Palace where no one pays attention to him. One of the two people he feels paternal affection for dies in front of him protecting her daughter in her arms, and he comes to hate the girl for it. Being the child of a lowborn, he develops an inferiority complex to that girl (who, as most would've guessed, is Tia) who is of pureblood, extremely competent, And loved by the emperor (unlike him). He is further manipulated by Duke Jenna, who tells of how Tia only views him as a way to gain greater power and rule the nation. He is fed both psychotropic drugs (which induces anger, bipolar conduct, and schizophrenia (inducing schizophrenia by drugs is impossible but it's fantasy so alright I guess?)... wonder if it's the fantasy world equivalent of datura?) and lies by everyone around him and finds his confirmation in Tia's icy conduct. This is Before he marries Tia. There's a ton of things that happen thereafter which will be talked about below.

You can see the creator, i.e. the author took a lot of time to create an absolute tragedy of errors. All of this could be better if any of the characters could communicate, but their personalities and positions prevent that from happening. Tia cannot bear Jieun's casual behavior and believes Ruve hates her. Jieun cannot approach Tia without being rebuffed and believes clinging to Ruve is her only way of survival and doesn't allow herself to be vulnerable in front of him. Ruve thinks Tia only wants him for his power and finds Jieun's affection to be far too shallow. As I said, it's a character drama, and its 1st timeline pulls that off well.

Issues arise with how the story goes about executing its plot thereafter. Initially, it gives the impression of being a narrative about a person coming into themselves, assuming power, becoming self-assured, and overcoming their trauma. Instead, it turns into a shoddy 'love overcomes all' romance with cheap villains who can hardly hold together their schemes.

The concept of love in this manhwa is shot to shit, swear to god. Love is built upon multiple things. It can be built upon admiration, yes, but unless one makes an effort to know someone love, in its truer (real, if you will) form, cannot exist. Love is built upon the small things, interactions, personal banter, shared memories, etc. In the first timeline Tia 'loves' Ruve because of fatum (fate) alone. Her 'love' persists in the face of cruelty, neglect, anger, abuse, and assault. After returning, she swears to Vita she will not follow fate again and not fall in love with Ruve again. Let's reiterate. She has No Reason to love him apart from her twisted fate.

In the first timeline, Ruve outright hates, despises, and has an inferiority complex towards Tia, and all of that is exacerbated by the weird plot convenient drug. They Never have an honest to god conversation, but even in all of their toxic situation he recognizes tia to be more competent than him and feels attracted to her. This becomes a constant source of self-hatred and disgust. His hate/love towards her dictates his actions towards Tia (whom he believes to be a powermonger), and he only gains instances of sobriety (from the drug) around Tia during really intense moments (when she says she's pregnant, when she loses her child, when she is executed, etc). (On that note, the licking of boot thing is non-canon acc the novel, and honestly... WHAT THE FUCK was the manhwa artist thinking when they added that if they already knew Ruve was ML).

I once read someone here say 'Imagine having to send off the person you love most to their death' re: tia being executed while ruve and jieun watched and honestly... that's fvcking laughable. What the author in the novel in those moments calls love can be at best called guilt, regret, and self-loathing on Ruve's part. His emotions for her thereon are marked with his shortcomings alongside regret and guilt. In thinking back to her grace and competence he almost deifies her erstwhile life. You can delude yourself into thinking you love what you've built someone up in your mind to be, but that isn't love either. Ruve sanctifies Tia's existence in his mind, falls in love with that, and that is what we are to believe his love comprises. (Also I was promised that novel!Ruve wasn't as bad as manhwa!Ruve and I had to wade through a fvckton of abuse apologies and 'Tia wasn't assaulted she stripped herself when Ruve told her to' (when she was in clear mental distress over it thinking it was the only way he could ever feel affection for her and coerced into consent) so fvck you to every single person who made me go through that muck, your ML is deplorable.)

My problem with how the author goes about developing romance between Ruve and Tia is how it completely disrespects the experiences of traumatized people and the intelligence of the readers. Even If someone wanted to go about writing something which redeems a past abuser (eg. 2ha, which sufficiently redeems the MC but I still dislike for entirely different reasons do not ask me) the only way a sensible person (be it a character or reader) would be able to accept it would be if the abuser addressed their past actions, made reparations for them, and then made an effort to build something positive with the person they hurt. The writer does that here with Jieun.

Jieun also hurts Tia, but through her POV she is the one worst-hit here. Remember when I said accepting Tia's scorn was one of two times Vita acted responsibly towards the lives of these characters? The only other time is when they offer to either send Jieun back to her world or go back in time. I honestly understood her choice. The memory of her life before is long faded, perhaps reeking of comfort she cannot see herself have in again now that she's experienced so much hurt.

Called God's child, yet isolated, neglected, constantly looked down upon, and scolded by her husband who only ever compares her to his other dead wife (who may have tried to kill her) and then even losing her child. She too burned with a desire for vengeance. But on seeing how Tia and Ruve have changed in this timeline, she makes belated attempts to aid them. She retains memories of her life and nearly kills Tia only to save her and then helps her uncover Jenna's actions. Her presence alone in the last life caused Tia a world of hurt, but in this life, she trades her abilities to save Tia. She redeems herself because she makes reparations for her past actions.

But Ruve? He's an entirely different person with the only knowledge of his actions from the first timeline coming from a letter that he wasn't even supposed to read. I completely understand that he's not the person who abused Tia in the first timeline, but as a reader, it's difficult to accept that the girl who was rendered catatonic for 2 days straight because he merely raised his voice went on to marry him. The writer seems to think that writing misery porn about ML's backstory in the first timeline will give him character depth and serve both as an excuse for his actions in the past and as a good foil against the 2nd timeline's new and improved version of himself.

Maybe these cheap tricks work on others, but it doesn't change the fact that whether under the duress of drugs and mental illness or not, his actions are veritably registered as abuse in Tia's mind. This begets the question 'is a mentally unsound person liable for the hurt they cause others?' and the answer to that is yes, yes they are. Tia has PTSD from her last life, and all of that is brushed under the rug in the face of affection from Ruve in this life. This is such a slap in the face of what overcoming PTSD is like.. here in Tia's mind it's 'just get over it lol' that's not how shit works dearest author. Giving reasons for committing abuse does not negate its existence, nor its consequence.

It feels even worse that Tia had to change to be a more socially engaging person for Ruve to fall for her in this life. She has to change to become palatable and understandable to Ruve in this life so he can stop hating her and then love her. Tia's feelings for him in this life also seem to build upon a shoddy foundation. Theirs is one of the flimsiest loves I've read (even if you were to take away the 'abused in former life' angle) and I say that as someone that used to read Mills and Boons novels to waste time.

I'll finally answer what I meant about irresponsible creators. Of course, in mishandling the lives of the aforementioned characters, Vita is one of the creators I speak of. The other is the author. In writing their 'love overcomes all' and 'deep down he was a good guy, actually' and 'forgiveness is so romantic even if the person you love is the one who traumatized you thoroughly before' romance novel, they fail to properly recognize and portray with consideration the many heavy issues that come up with executing such a plot. They were so focused on making excuses for their ML and making the romance work that they failed to recognize just what they were romanticizing and what they have failed to write well, and I pray that neither they nor anyone who likes these sorts of novels has to suffer half of what they glorify.

There's also a ton of things to say about plot holes everywhere, about how no time frame was given as to the administration of the convenient fantasy drug so it can become a consistent (with 1st timeline) plot point in the 2nd timeline, my thoughts on Allen, Carsein, and Jieun's fates at the novel's end, etc, but at this point I'm tired and I'm sure you, the reader of this review, is too. Thank you for making it this far. My contempt for this novel has been building for quite some time, I know I'm insane for making such a long comment but ya know? to purge something vicious from your mind you've just got to give it the shape it desires, and for me, that shape was this comment.

... Last updated on May 18th, 2021, 12:22am
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Cliché Pairing and Unreasonable Plotline  
by Violetgirl110
August 2nd, 2020, 10:48pm
Rating: N/A
No matter how much the FMC tries to escape her fate she still loves her abuser from her past life, the rapist prince. The prince is a despicable character and still gets to be the main lead love interest. Even though she's reincarnated to a new life, the prince ia not justified. Then, there's the return of a dumbass whiny "child of prophecy", Jieun, she's evil, lazy, and manipulative yet still get to be "the child of God." What kind of God ia that?!? Sounds more like Lucifer.
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Spoilers on Why It's Worth a Shot  
by Castalia_
July 12th, 2020, 7:57pm
Rating: N/A
TLDR: There are a lot of second chance/isekai manhwas/manhuas that is about coming back for revenge on the person who betrayed her and if that's what you're looking for, this isn't for you.

It has a lot of similar trope of the "reborn/isekai" genre. First timeline or in the original story, the FL is ignored/hated by everyone else around her and doesn't have many/any friends. She is reborn (or now the MC is in the FL's body with MC's personality and not the original character's personality), she's now a "better" person and is now loved by (mostly) everyone because she's so smart, nice, etc (Think Duchess with An Empty Soul [reborn], The Duchess' 50 Tea Recipes [iseaki]).

I can understand the reason why people dislike/hate this manhwa. I started reading this and then went to read the novel because I want to make sense of the spoilers and comments on the manhwa. Now that I finished the Korean novel, I can understand why she ends up with the person she did in the end. This is similar to Doctor Elise and Survive as the Hero's Wife and kind of similar to Suddenly Became A Princess One Day (except FL here is executed by her father in the first "timeline", and not her husband). In this case, I feel that if the author didn't dwell too much (making it 6 chapters) on her first timeline, this manhwa will get less hate (compare to these similar manhwas).


Extremely long reasons for not hating the direction the manhwa/novel went:

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1. People are angry Tia ends up with her abuser (the crowned prince) in the end.
But she didn't. Yes, Rube (ML/prince) abused her in the first timeline. And I think he deserve the fate that he got in the first timeline. Someone else here explained what happened but he did not get a happy ending. But 2nd timeline Rube is NOT the same person. There is a conversation that Tia (FL) has with Ji-Eun in the novel about nature vs. nurture. Is someone's personality set in stone and it's not something that you can change? The author of the novel is making an argument that that isn't the case. Similar to how Tia is no longer how she was in the first timeline, Rube isn't the same person either. Can we hold something that 2nd Timeline Rube has not commit against him? In the second timeline, at the beginning, he is a bit of an a-hole toward her. But if we look at the situation from his perspective, everyone, including his own father and "mother" (the empress, not his birth mother), treat this girl better than him. If it's just tutors and other people, okay. But when your own parents treat a random girl better than you, you'll probably be a bit hostile toward her. And then, once Tia transmigrates, she is always super afraid of him. But at this point, he hasn't done anything to her besides act a bit cold, so he doesn't understand why. But once he found out why (via the letter), he changes his attitude toward her.

2. People are angry that she transmigrated so that she can be better suited for prince/Rube.
Except I don't think that's the case. She transmigrated so that she can "pioneer" her own path. In the first timeline, she was destined to be the empress and because of that, Tia never had any agenda of her own. She did as she was told - which was to love the prince and be the perfect empress. Looking at this objectively, I don't even know why in the first timeline she even liked the prince besides she was supposed to. In the novel, she tells Ji-Eun that in the first timeline that the only person she cares about is the prince. Even after all that happened, up to the point she thought Rube killed her father (he didn't actually, the prince lied, the father was alive until she died and then he committed suicide), she didn't even care about how he treated her and just wanted him to love her. She was upset that she lost her baby because she thought if they had a baby together, the prince would love her. She was upset she couldn't have any baby because she thought the prince would love her if she could have a child. Her entire world revolved around him.

In the novel, Rube and a couple of people brought it up but kept avoiding talking about what actually happened, but something happened when Tia was young (around five). I'm not sure whether it's whatever this was that cause her to become emotionless or just people training her that she shouldn't show emotions, but she became emotionless and had no friends. In addition to having no friends, her emotionless also cause issues with her relationship with her father, who also had issues with openly showing his love, too. (He did love her though - side note below on that). But in the second timeline, because she's more open with her affection toward her father, her father in turn learns to be slightly more open with showing his love for her. And in being more affectionate for the people around her (her father, the knights, etc), she changed everyone, including the crowned prince/Rube. And I don't think they would end up together if he doesn't change either (more on that later).

And for those who are saying she ends back up with Rube so nothing has changed/she hasn't pioneer anything. But this time around, she chooses to be with Rube. She doesn't end up with him because of fate or because she is told to, but she decides in the end to accept him. She chooses to become an empress.

[Side note for people who are hating on the father: There's an explanation on why Tia's father acts the way he does. Tia's mother was betrothed to the emperor but she and Tia's father fell in love with each other. The emperor let them get married on the condition that Tia's father swears a blood oath to be loyal to the imperial family aka he will die if he break the oath. But he does love his daughter - in the end of the first timeline, when he realized that she was miserable in this marriage, he didn't care about his blood oath anymore, he went to the prince (emperor) to get him to let her leave the palace.]

3. People are angry why she doesn't end up with the second leads (Allendis/Carsien) over the ML (who causes her PTSD).
Sadly both of them never had a chance. Tia did not come back for romantic relationships or even revenge. When she died in the first timeline, she was abandoned by the person she married, she was abandoned by people who were supposedly supporting her (the pro-emperor faction), and she lost her father. She just wanted to have friends who won't abandon her and actually have a healthy loving relationship with her father.

Because of what happened with Rube in the first timeline, she didn't think she could love anyone again because she would always be afraid of the person she loves abandoning her again. While I don't agree with this, but, the way the novel is written (and it's in first person perspective from Tia's POV), the only person that can make her love again is Rube. Going off a line she says in the novel to sum it up: She is no longer the abandoned empress but the beloved empress. If it's anyone else she ends up with, she still would be the abandoned empress. Only by ending up with Rube, she is no longer "abandoned." Rube in the first timeline abandons her easily as soon as Ji-Eun appears. Only the 2nd timeline Rube can prove that she won't be easily abandoned. And he does prove this to her time and time again that he won't abandon her for her to finally accept him in the end (Ji-Eun appearing, the doctor misdiagnosing her to be infertile, meaning that he won't have a heir, etc).

Also while I do see the argument for Carsien for a better match for her, but Allendis is an obsessive psychopath. Not to the point of hurting her but definitely not a healthy relationship.

The novel is 300+ chapters long, and it isn't until 280something that they finally end up together. She doesn't easily end back up with the person who cause her PTSD. There are times where she does compare him to the 1st timeline Rube and he has to and does prove to her that he isn't him for her to get pass it. And she wasn't fully heal from all that happened in the first timeline until the very end when he does a blood oath to promise her that he will love her forever in return for her being by his side forever.


However, I would recommend this, because it's an interesting take for second chance manhwa/novel. Of course, you'll have to be open-minded that the 2nd timeline Rube isn't the same person as the 1st timeline Rube. If you read the first couple of chapters about 1st timeline and then the spoiler/ending, it won't make sense on why she ends up with she does. But if you do get it a shot and read the entire thing (yes, I know the manhwa isn't finish), you can see why she does.

... Last updated on July 15th, 2020, 5:51pm
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Mediocre at best  
by PZcolo
August 27th, 2019, 1:37am
Rating: 4.0  / 10.0
Read "Accomplishments of a Duke's daughter" instead, that would be my recommendation. It's the exact same thing done better, there are also others which plot are different but are similar, like "They say I was born a King's daughter" or "Daughter of the emperor".
This one starts quite bad, the story of all she has to endure in her first life is just too much for the story to later try to humanize the prince yet that's the road it takes (only read 30ch so far) and even after all that the MC is trying to figure out how the prince thinks and pending on every little detail of his life, that he looked like this, that he gets angry by that, that he despises her for some reason and so on and even hope to get him to feel for her or what he would think of her... He freaking killed your father, your unborn baby and you, and you care if he feels something for you? this is unbelievable.
You would also think she would have learned to doubt and wisen up on who to trust after all she's been through yet she's still the same idiot as before, annoying to say the least. And the further you read the more you'll realize that the MC doesn't have an ounce of self-respect, not a MC I could ever care about.
Really, it's hard to get interested in the story or characters. Also, just because she went out crying her life changed 180 degrees? everyone either ignored or hated her in her first life but magically no one can help but want to be her friend or pamper her the second time around... Yes, the emperor is interested in her because of the oracle, but that does not seam to be the case with the others.
Last, there are just too many things that don't add up, small things but they pile up and I get annoyed with all the little things that feel off and make me unable to take in the story just as it is, ej, the prince studies a lot ok, but how is it reasonable that a 12 year old prince has a pile of paperwork? How is the MC who analyzes every little thing of others not able to see the sudden change of personality of her only friend? She's brillant and 1 chapter later she's an idiot, pretty much no one act's like nobility much less royalty yet when convenient they have to check what they say or do, etc, etc, there are many little things that I usually dismiss but annoy me here,
Other than being cute there is not much going for this story and add to that that it seams the ending is terrible and I'd say I've had enough of it. Dropped.

While reading this it came to my attention once again that shoujo manga always have way too many complications, seams women love complicated romances, and on the other hand, shounen are all about instant gratification nowadays which is even worse, strangely enough my taste goes right in the middle.

... Last updated on August 27th, 2019, 2:26am
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Poor Conclusion  
by Pandoreye
August 13th, 2021, 10:57am
Rating: 5.0  / 10.0
There are a ton of really long detailed comments on here so I don't really think I'll have anything to add that hasn't already been discussed. Regardless, here are my thoughts:
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- I thought this started out very strong and had a good premise. I wish the story kept the wild energy of the first five chapters. Instead, it became very tame after she traveled back in time.
- I loved how they emphasized the father-daughter bond in the beginning. It got kind of sidelined though. I would have preferred it if her father stayed a major character throughout the story.
- I was very entertained by the first 75% of the story, but it went down a rabbit hole at the end with the poison conspiracy. I just don't think the author handled that plotline very well. They threw in random characters that I just didn't care two cents about. Like, whatever. Off with their heads - who cares?
- I did not like the romance in this. She ends up with the worst option (he literally traumatized her - I don't care if there was a time reset - it still happened) and it left a bad taste in my mouth. Why does every female in a story have to become royalty in the end? Is a romance story not worth it if the protagonist doesn't become a princess/queen/empress? Blegh. I was rooting for Carsein.
- I feel like the author tried so hard to push that this girl was "strong" by having her go the knight path. It doesn't mean anything though. She doesn't act like someone who can protect herself and in the end, she quits being a knight. I hated that she quit.
- What is up with the tragedy tag? The only tragedy is how the romance concludes.
- In my opinion, the author had a good thing going at the beginning and it was fairly addicting to read, but this ended up going in the wrong direction.
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My Opinion: No Hating  
by Sylphenne
August 29th, 2020, 1:59am
Rating: N/A
This is my opinion but....

1. We have to accept that our FL and ML have their own faults. We have too look deeper as to why they acted that way. Both of them were puppets and a doll used masterfully by their factions. Our female lead is only focused on her and the prince and forgot to look at her surroundings.

2. As his second wife and for being in a political marriage, our FL has a duty to give birth to the next Emperor.

3. I think our ML despite being poisoned and being controlled as a puppet is still rational. He never slept with his Empress ( Jeiun ) and his Queen ( Aristia ) despite everyone pishing him to sleep with them so that they can have a baby. Of course this is politics people, the nobles wants to control the baby for their own political gain. But yes, he never did... not until the said 'rape' happened.

4. When our ML ( Ruveliss ) told our FL ( Aristia ) to strip and forced her, he was just fed up with her faction, the imperialist always bugging him to sleep with her already so that her baby can represent the Imperialist faction. Our ML thought that our FL is asking them for her ... or so he thought.

5. Actually if you ask me she can really push him away but she didn't ... instead of thinking such thing, she though that maybe if she make love to him, if she give her whole self to him then maybe she can gain his attention and love. She also gave him her wholeself because she is after all his queen, his concubine. [ As such our ML even thought that she might be aiming to be his favourite concubine by doing so ]

6. The killed her child part ... in this, she was already slowly poisoned. Hence for her weak body. The ML did push her but it was but an accident but of course we won't look in that right? Our FL was standing so close to our ML, if you remember Aristia almost fell due to dizziness but Ruveliss caught her, then Jeiun barged in the room without even knocking and went mad at them so Ruveliss tried to stop Jeiun to explain and forgot the Aristia was standing so close to him.

7. In the POV of our ML ... he hated her because of the report that was given to him. When Aristia went to work the next day as if nothing happened to her. She just had a miscarriage! Yet she worked the next day?! Amazing right? She didn't even mourn for tge lost child and it made Ruveliss hate her more ... she thought of her as a cruel woman who won't even mourn for the death of their child.

8. So Aristia worked the next day as if nothing happened. I do think she was stupid and cruel... this FL... the reason she didn't mourn for the child is because she was more hurt for the fact that since she can never have a child anymore, she can never have his attention anymore. She was just planning on using the child as a way to gain his attention and live and now that the child is gone, he'll never look at her anymore.

9. With this both of them felt like they are no longer needed. Ruveliss felt that Aristia was happy because she doesn't have to carry his child. Aristia thought that Ruveliss will now leave her for good and she can no longer win his heart because of this indcident. Again, they think too political here... because that's their environment they grew up with.


All in all, their first timeline is too political and their minds got distorted. But we have to remember that this is set during medival times and political marriage is common and accepted, especially for nobles like them... also they are no ordinary nobles... they are raised as the future Emperor and Empress.

This story is an emotional roller coaster and our author made it so. But we have to be honest that what happened to them in their first life is the fault of their own upbringing, they weren't ordinary people nor nobles. But because they were all starving for love becuase they do not know it, they became twisted and lonely.

Their second timeline is a good what if they were like this in the first then the first timeline didn't have to happen.

You also have to remember the madness of politics and nobles and human's greed for power can cause one to be twisted. They were playing a game of tactics and people treated them as chess pieces. This isn't a story that only focused on love but also politics and freedom from past trauma.

Its just ironic that the one who freed Aristia from her trauma is none other than the person who gave it to her... although its the second timeline him. None of them changed, what changed is that they realized what could have happened if they continued to go on that path and that triggered the changes.
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Ew, what?  
by MaZzAx
May 23rd, 2020, 6:17am
Rating: 1.0  / 10.0
So, this manga was reading as well as the other strong female lead mangas I've been enjoying lately. The female lead is treated poorly and eventually executed but then gets a second chance at life and vows not to follow the same path again - great. I was really enjoying it for a while, until I realised where the author was taking it.
I agree with the majority of other reviewers here - what the hell is up with her falling for the prince again? Disgusting. How can I be expected to get on board with that after everything he did to her in the beginning? Um, no. Big mistake.
Dropped.
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