Jun and Kaoru: Pure and Fragrant

The nonexistence of a plot doesn't bother me since each chapter seems to be a snapshot in time of a specific day or event. Its more about feelings and imagination I think. It might be grating if it goes on for too long though but it doesn't for now.

A huge plus to me is how the supernatural part is handled. The sexchange is accepted as normal by all characters around and is not a point of interest to anyone except maybe barely to themselves which makes it, somehow, refreshing and easy. By that I mean that it doesn't tax your suspense of disbelief since there is noone trying to make sense of it. You can just ignore it and accept it since its part of reality, its like water is wet kinda thing. It just is. Very refreshing to read and to imagine about the world building. Gorgeous art.

It got potential. It can either bomb or be real good, too early to tell as of 9 chapters.
Tentative 6,5/10 for the idea and art, will drop significantly unless the characters gets some depth or something.

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Typical Slice of Life

by big_red01027
3 years ago

Rating: 7.0 / 10.0

It goes nowhere and was a mere 16 chapters. Intriguing concept, but a failure in pretty much any other metric.

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Interesting, but Poorly Executed

by gloriousmangalover
6 years ago

Rating: 4.0 / 10.0

Lovely art, interesting premise, but really flawed execution. The storytelling wasn’t there, the paneling was pretty bad, and the characters’ very limited dialogue constantly made no sense. If the author had attempted to connect and make the scenes flow better, perhaps the storylines of each episode would make more logical sense rather than feeling like some sort of badly-assorted puzzle with random events and random actions and random lines. Therefore, 4/10.

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