Story - 7.5
Art - 7
Character - 7.5
This is a perfect example of a complete opposite of the "show don't tell" rule. Well unless the author intentionally did so for the sake of parody. And as a reader, it was like I'm reading chapter 1 while someone was foretelling what's gonna happen in chapter 2. The story itself was a freaking. open. book.
Story. It was left hanging in my opinion,
especially the thing about the saint.
We did not get any side stories (did we? Or are we even gonna have it?) so it's plausible to think that this is axed.
! Eh- was Susan's character intended to be a laughing stock right from the start to show that all antagonists who seem special would always end up destroyed?
Squint a little and you'd think that Susan was Cinderella.
Character. It's too obvious, as evident in some of the reviews here.
Adelle, my girl, you don't force someone to tell you that he loves you. If he does, he does. If he doesn't, well, try harder. I don't know about her but I'm sure as hell don't want to hear a scripted "I love you". I seriously liked Adelle's wit up until this moment. What triggered it all was an obsessed maid's delusional statement. And Felix's smile which was (indirectly) part of their plan. Man, if you're gonna trick someone into thinking you're being kind to them, you have to at least show them, y'know like, a smile?
And those villains. They remind me of the antagonists in a classic Filipino action comedy films.
Art. It was not appealing to me in the first few chapters but it gradually became better in the latter ones. I appreciate it tho since drawing takes a lot of time and effort.
So should you read this? Well definitely, if you're into subtle hints of parody. This will give you a good laugh, but on romantic side, err, probably not.