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Post #776919
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8:48 am, May 12 2020
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Hello,

The world it takes place in is knowledgeable of demons and angels and people live there lives in fear of the ever lasting war that takes place between the two races. One day during summer, the OL, Miyu, is leaving work and is attacked by a few lower level demons. The main character demon. (No name for him yet.) Steps in a stops the demons from harming Miyu and then marks her to keep her safe from any demons before him, the main demons who cause issues are the lowest level. Not even a day later, when she is going back to work she is met by a High Angel who removes the mark and departs after telling her that nothing good comes of demons and humans mingling.The angels name is Seraphine ometv chatroulette chat avenue The angel has gold armor that covers only her arms, hips, bosom, and legs. A skirt that is flowing and blue hair. Anyway, the demon comes back and tries to mark her again, only to be attacked by that angel and this is where we learn about the physiology that makes of a Demon and Angel Body. Angels are made of light, their blood is liquid light and shines brilliantly. They feed off the sunlight, but in their world, on their side of the world the brighter the light the higher the angel and if you can stand more light you can get stronger but it usually takes time. Demons are made of poison. Their blood is poison, and the higher levels of poison the strongest they can get. The deeper in the demons side of their world, the stronger the poison. The very ends of both worlds is where the leaders of these worlds reside. The Masera for the Demons and the Arch Deity for the angels. Light hurts demons when it pierces them, and poison hurts angels for the same reasons. The main character puts up a fight, but his level is not even close to the Sera's who cuts off an arm and jabs a light spike into his stomach and then finishes by cutting off his wings. She departs without care or worry and Miyu takes the demon home after pulling the spike from his belly. In great pain he is unable to move, but Miyu feels compelled to help him simply cause he was only trying to help her. But a few hours after the stabbing, the demon sprouts Angel wings. His power is super weak though. (I should mention that both the demon and angel worlds is the same plain while the Earth is on another. Clouds form the portals between both so if clouds suddenly appear someone is coming or going. Storm clouds signify the stronger entities.) Anyway, the demon tries to live as an angel for a time, meeting people, it would turn into a Harem manga by this point as he would meet a girl who is trying to save a tree and uses what little power he has to save it. Meets another girl that is into demons, and can sense them. She is an odd goth girl. So this is where a few characters would be introduced. This arch would end with his powers waning so much that he has to go to the angels side of the realm and recover powers in the pure light of there world. Connecting the two worlds is a rock walk way that goes thru a large amount of fog. The demon would be watching it when Sera would appear and show her loving side.

He is hiding his face while leaning on a guard post when he senses some demonic poison arrows flying at Sera, he intercepts them and is taken, as a noble warrior to a place deeper into the angels world. Sera, who had literally forgotten him already would remember after a moment, the demon waking up before she does and he would escape. Now with demon wings again. He is able to speed out of there while under attack and go back to the demon side to recover. But his eyes are changed as he has one white, the usual eye color of angels and one black demons. After recovering he would flee the realm and go back to live with the OL. Here we would find out she has a scientist uncle who lives no to far who picked up the light spike a very rare thing to get. With a grin on his face the first arch would end.

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iosman

Last edited by iosman001 at 9:00 am, May 14

Post #776960
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8:00 pm, May 13 2020
Posts: 26


Sounds nice , for the first chapters ,a bit like Shadowhunters maybe.

I would recommend you brainstorming the outlines of the whole plot including all what ifs and bifurcations as nodes .

And then do three folders:
1) a folder for world building and the storyboard
2) with a few main/relevant characters
3) separate folder for the characters/posible characters (with descriptions /traits / posible relations with the story) you come up with whilst thinking of the plot .

And then sequentially mash it all together slowly completing the storyboard (usually the plot deviates from what you first thought, but it helps with not going in circles)

In order to make it easier to change the arks however you want instead of doing it ark by ark and it also gives you folders with characters you can recycle for another project.

I hope it is helpful and good luck with the project
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Post #776964
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10:20 pm, May 13 2020
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not a bad idea.

It would help to form character sheets, be aware of cliche.

making your world with a definite structure and lore is good, although the readers do not have to know everything about how it works, as long as it is coherent it will show in your story. The important thing is to set boundaries that you can't pass and make it unbelievable to a point of ridicule.

good luck, it would be interesting to see drawings that goes with it, though I am not a fan of harem.

Post #778693
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5:54 pm, Jul 20 2020
Posts: 22


Kinda reminds of Penryn and end of days. One thing I liked about the series is that the bad guys are the angels. I don't mean yours should be like that too. You mentioned that the human world is being ravaged by the war between angels and demons. So are the demons strictly evil and the angels are strictly good. Or are they simply two races who think and feel and have complex emotions like humans. Two races at war for their own agendas? Like you can't pick a side and said these guys are totally bad and these guys are totally good. In this case the MC would be an anomaly, a demon that is good. All the stuff I mentioned above can be interesting as long as it's executed well. Since the main theme of your work is angels and demons, I hope you think on it this well.
I wish you all the best in your manga

Post #778694
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5:54 pm, Jul 20 2020
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Kinda reminds of Penryn and end of days. One thing I liked about the series is that the bad guys are the angels. I don't mean yours should be like that too. You mentioned that the human world is being ravaged by the war between angels and demons. So are the demons strictly evil and the angels are strictly good. Or are they simply two races who think and feel and have complex emotions like humans. Two races at war for their own agendas? Like you can't pick a side and said these guys are totally bad and these guys are totally good. In this case the MC would be an anomaly, a demon that is good. All the stuff I mentioned above can be interesting as long as it's executed well. Since the main theme of your work is angels and demons, I hope you think on it this well.
I wish you all the best in your manga

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