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"Rat" mage fantasy in ruins hunting treasure

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4:13 am, Mar 4 2017
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Err so the story is about(trying to make it simple)

- a black girl who was a swordman but actually a great mage who studied under sage. She prank on him and got cursed that everytime she cast a spell, she gonna turned into a rat. She need to drink a pill to turn her back to normal.

- she have companion, an elf with tan skin. She was clumsy and klutz but was a magic user and can use staff

they both going to ruins, to find a treasure(they both works as treasure hunter), to find rich and fame but the main objectives is to find the cure of the black girl curse.

in the way they meet another duo , a mage woman and a swordman. They both are stronger than the 2 girl, and fighting each other in the ruins.

In the end , when the elf stay in a town, she go out somewhere and got attacked by monsters. She got saved by a prince from fallen kingdom and she fall in love. The prince say his country had been ruined by a dark mage, who also kidnap her lover. The elf then fallin love with him because he was kind and handshome and decided to help him, much to the black girl complain.

The mage woman somehow meet the prince and fall in love with the prince too. Both the sword man and the black girl kinda dislike the prince and say "we just a treasure hunters, why we need to fry our life into some dangerous thing like fighting the dark mage "

the swordman dislike the prince because of jealously+ he hate risking his life for nothing(means he did not get payed).

the black girl dislike the prince because he basically delayed her plan to get cured + after seeing that this prince was a reckless type(there's an incedent because the dark mage taunt the prince to save her lover, he lure his team into a trap) , she begin understanding that her life and her partner, the elf surely will be in danger.

the last scene i remember was the dark mage turned the prince lover into a half snake, and the prince somehow got "fooled" or "controlled" to slash her lover. When the prince realized it, the dark mage was laughing and he doing it for something like "ritual" , and then use some channeling dark magic to collapse the ruin they stayed at and such.

Then i saw the prince and the elf attended the prince lovers wound(she not dead, the elf was a healer mage too), and the black girl use her magic to stop the dark mage magic.

the dark mage who was already leaving, thinking that the group is dead, was surpised, because someone using the same magic as him + it have the same wave length as him, it implied that the dark mage either the black girl father, grandpa or some far away relative in some weird blood lineage.



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4:49 pm, Mar 4 2017
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It's Ruin Explorers.

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1:08 am, Mar 5 2017
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thanks alot biggrin

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