there are a few things I felt that weren't fully concluded.

1. Thornpricker needed to be punished for all the things she did to Misty-Rain. I know that Misty-Rain had to take responsibility for her own action.

She did destroy the pepper field and lie to the king and for that she had to do manual labor and stay in a prison cell. Thornpricker had been tormenting Misty-Rain, killed Misty-Rains baby chicks, lied all the time and was grounded for like a week as punish Thornpricker is mean and selfish throughout the entire story but at the end she has a "nice" thought once and that's the last we hear of her. I wanted to see how she reacts to Misty-Rain's status at the end of the story and if she really changes.

2. I wish the author had show us a little more of Misty-Rain's future.

How the people reacted when she returned, her interactions with her father, and if she got married right away.
3. Since she's half human would she be able to go back and forth between the two worlds.

Over all it was a good story.