story???...*spoilers*

15 years ago
Posts: 85
the story was really good! 😀
i can't believe Belus was actually Belial!!! X_X ...i'm glad that he and Pamela had a good ending together and they reconciled, but i feel a little down. Why did Ash have to "love himself" so much!!>:-( ! I really liked him, but...what a jerk! REALLY! how could he leave Pamela for 700 years to suffer knowing that she loved him? ??? and at the end of the series, they met each other but he doesn't remember ANYTHING...how sad! it must've been so hard for her to see him and hear that he didn't know her. BOO! :(
i'm feeling depressed cause of it.
anyway, to top it off, Aaron had to die at the end. because there was too much immortal people, i totally forgot that he wasn't an immortal. :no:
i definately liked the series! it's one of the best i've read and i'm rating it 10 out of 10!!!
dang. Belus was so hot. especially when Pamela saw him in hell. (towards the end of the story, him carrying a scythe) Kyah! 😀 🤢 🤢 🤢 Ash, too, was super-duper hot throughout the whole series!!! 😀 he's such a beautiful dragon! how even more sad. 🙁

14 years ago
Posts: 28
I know I was absolutely shocked too! What a twist! Though im still confused if they made up at the end and how their relationship will be...

14 years ago
Posts: 32
I actually enjoyed the twist, that is
Belus is Belial because it makes the story even more interesting (I have to reread the whole thing for better understanding). The ending is nice and it shows Pamela is not resentful of what has happened and she is trying to accept herself and her immortality.
I don't blame Ash for wanting death, since he has lived for too long. To be born and to die is normal and is part of life, and Ash wants that, even if he has to use Pamela (which is wrong and Pamela has to suffer a lot).
I was sad that Aaron dies at the end, but even sadder because he and Nebiros hasn't patched up their relationship, but perhaps they will in Aaron's next life.