I've released chapter 2 of my manga. This one's shorter but I wanted to make this separate from chapter 3 because otherwise this chapter would've been a bit too long and would've taken too much time in between chapters, and I feel like this is a good build-up for chapter 3. I tried focusing more on my artstyle this time to improve it and I'll keep doing so in the future too of course.

Like last time, I'd appreciate feedback on the chapter down here or down in the comments of Manga Plus Creators or MangaDex, if you're interested in reading it. It helps me out a lot and helps me see flaws and room for improvement I wouldn't otherwise notice easily.

You can read it on
Manga Plus Creators: https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/nv2406050409186040026482849
or
MangaDex: https://mangadex.org/title/fb697e84-7497-44f7-893d-e1416506092b/exit-lane

I recommend making a note at the start that the comic is designed to be read right to left. Most OEL Manga is Left to right so having it noted helps.

Yeah good idea. Gonna add that to the start of each chapter if I'm able to edit them.