I've recently released chapter 1 of my first manga. You can read it here: https://medibang.com/mpc/titles/nv2406050409186040026482849/
I'd appreciate if you'd be able to leave a like if you enjoyed it or leave a comment on Manga Plus Creators or down here on what you thought of it and what I could improve on.

Not bad. Art's passable. I didn't feel confused as to where the movement was going. Story obviously feels incomplete. Don't know if this is intentional, or if you intend to continue this work. I was expecting the girl to suddenly become some badass getaway driver, but it's your story, not mine. Overall i'd give it like a solid 5 out of 10 purely on the aspect that it's too short to care about these people, there's no resolution, and the situation is kinda vague. If there's a chapter 2 incoming, I'll upgrade to 6/10.

I left the same comment on your other platform just to prove that your effort to reach out to Manga Updates wasn't totally in vain.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah there will be more chapters incoming, I'm currently working on and writing chapter 2.