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Post #573023
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7:21 pm, Oct 8 2012
Posts: 47


I mean, the tennis part is well done, but since it's too focused on the tennis, it feels timeskipped too much

Barely nothing happened in his life aside from moving from a competition or another

match > training (months skipped) > match > repeat

it would be better to stray from main plot once in a while for some romance and slice of life

Post #609345
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1:50 am, Aug 1 2013
Posts: 13


I agree its starting to get annoying. I might just drop it til its completed.

Post #609429
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11:08 pm, Aug 1 2013
Posts: 13


I plan on reading them two volumes at a time. It is starting to become tiresome.

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