I dunno if this is the right section for this post , but please listen + comment on two songs i composedd in my spare time... Im a newbie at composing so i wish to hear some comments

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Its good. But I don't exactly know what your trying to do with it exactly. Is it a showcase for technical prowess? And can you actually play that? (It was a midi file so I don't know if that is actually you playing).

Classical music isn't really my thing, but I do dig the stops and tempo shifts.

Listen here
Livin just to keep from dyin
[img]http://imagegen.last.fm/TheDarkTen/recenttracks/imgooley.gif[/img]

You have guts to ask for opinions about something like this from essentially total strangers, so I give you props for that.

I'm in no way any kind of expert so I'll just tell you what I think:
Above The Moon: The first 50 seconds were pretty good and had a good flow with it. The last 12 seconds seemed to be forced somehow, like you wanted to end the song.

Behind the Wall: Kind of a wierd song. There was a really awkward silence at 00:27 (00minutes and 27 seconds). This kind of split the song and made it seem like 2 songs for the first 27 seconds and the last half a different song. Again, the ending could also use some work.

Good attempts at writing and composing music, but it could use a little bit of tweaking.

"When we remember we are all mad, the mysteries disappear and life stands explained."

• Samuel Clemens/Mark Twain

I am by no means expert but I generally listen to various kind of music including classical. Hmm I actually liked behind the moon but as for behind the wall...
I think it started well but as mentioned above it looks like there are two songs and the second (after 27s) sounds rushed and uncertain...
But no matter, I think its great that you try to compose and have the guts to ask opinions. Good luck

wow thx for the comments xD it was rushed causeee i dunno how to use overture program and it only gave me so many bars ... >< but oh wellsz =) i'll exploree the program as i compose more =0 thx for the advices a bunch xD it helped me think about it alot xD thx again

maybe i can use behind the wall for 2 different songs instead of forcing it into one =)

The songs sound promising, I'll expect you to put some more up for us to hear again.

hehe =) thx for the encouragement xD