A rather strange manga, this one, in the sense that it harbours so many conflicting aspects that I want to rant about. I could value the elegant historical atmosphere along with its grandeur that was mostly brought about by the splendidly sleek art and costume designs. I also appreciate the author's effort in introducing bits and pieces of facts and cultural references related to the time period in Japan. And unlike most people I don't find the differences (in many ways) between the couple very uncomfortable and inappropriate at all. (Maybe I've become too saturated now to feel disturbance within whatever I'm going to come across..? lol)
HOWEVER, putting the positives aside, there are some serious issues I have with this that no matter what I can't turn a blind eye to them and let things slide so easily. The biggest problem for me would be the level of immature and nonsensical logics used for reasoning that I found absurdly bizarre and almost agonising. If the story is trying to be serious, the least thing I would expect it to do is to have some common sense; more than once I felt the need to drag myself through all the 3-year-old kind of arguments and dialogues exchanged between supposedly cool and mature 'adults', which is something I absolutely detest to do. Would it hurt if they were to sound and act more like their age and status, even if just a little? I don't mean the reasoning during those comical jokes, because those are intended pun relief, but rather the dead-face-serious actions and measures that in the end seemed more childish and even fatuous to me.
Not only that, but the structure throughout the whole story is also very odd. Events just jumble around, one climbing over another disrupting the readers' current train of thought to a different direction. Characters appear out of no where only to be discarded shortly afterwards; the author's emphasise and grip on the situation are still rather weak. All those factors accumulate to make a rather unpleasant experience for the readers, or at least for me. Not to mention the fact that the artist mangaka's panelling was not the most exciting and thrilling thing in the world, you could say it got a bit wordy here and there, since I for one basically just had to skim through some of the speech bubbles to be able to finish.
And last but not least, boy is this manga anti-climatic. It always seems to get to a certain point of a conflict - a device usually executed to develop the story or characters to a new desired state, and this story in particular isn't shy at all about building those conflicts up all over the place, though in the end those elaborating sets up all get to no where, none whatsoever. It creates a sense of discontinuity and dissatisfactory, from chapter to chapter, to the point that I always had this lurking frustration deep down to jump at someone and yell at them, because every time I expect to see a big outcome happening it usually bursts into nothing without fail, causing much discontentment and vexation..
I don't want to be so harsh here because I do think this is a decent-ish attempt of both these 2 mangakas, and actually the manga's quite pretty to look at. If only my nerves weren't so feeble sigh