Story 01:
Exactly what I was looking for, such strong angst that it would lose my balance, and it did. I cried.
Well, the art is amazing as Minase-sensei's usual – but I actually think Jun's much hotter than Motoki.
As is seems to happen in a lot of manga, the two most interesting characters weren't the main ones. I'm not so sure about the character construction regarding the couple. Jun's actions seem to be a little over the top. Just because he overheard conversation he didn't even know what meant, he went as far as changing his cell phone number? I get that he's insecure, but I think that's a little exaggerated. And I don’t understand Hayato much, since he doesn't verbalize his feelings to Jun, skips his birthday and doesn't explain to him what's going on. Though he gained some points by being so patient when explain all that silly misunderstanding. And I also don't understand why people hate on him so much. He just has a hard time expressing his feelings, he's not insensitive or mean.
The interesting characters were, in fact, Motoki and Jun’s boss.
The boss was obviously in love with Jun. It was cute and bitter, everything I love. Still, it left me sad. And Motoki not only does he not want to interfere in their relationship, he actually helps them. Yes, he is cruel, which means I'm not quite sure whether I love him or hate him. And that's precisely what's good about him, his uniqueness. Also, it was really interesting that he was bisexual and actually dating a girl. That's unusual when it comes to yaoi.
As for the story…I’m sorry, but I don’t understand why so many people loved it. It’s pretty predictable and cliché. Not that it’s bad, but it’s not nearly remarkable as well. I think it would be more interesting if the focus was on Jun's position as an outsider to Hayato's and Motoki's relationship in high school.
Story 02:
I like it way more than the first, and I can’t tell precisely why.
It was cute and had a light-headed feeling that I loved, for some reason (I’m usually a sucker for angst and don’t like light stories). Maybe it was because the characters are quite my type, especially the seme.
It was also really original. I’ve never seen anything like it before.
PS: @happyliez I prefer deep stories, which is why I'm not rating this very highly.