First off, some of these chapters were scanslated really, really badly. The image quality was bad, the sentences were bad (everything about them - structure, grammar, spelling, etc.), the cleaning was bad. A lot of times I had only a vague guess about or even no idea what the sentences were trying to say, even though they were technically in English... Not good. Some other chapters were okay.

About the story. The human couple was beyond creepy. Pedophilia is so not my thing. Yuck. Just...gross.

However, I skipped over the human parts and read about the spirits, who were the more interesting ones (and way less creepy). But even then, I think the art could have been cleaner and the story a lot better. It had potential to be really fun... sadly, it didn't quite make it. It was pretty...um, great.

But you should read some of this authors other works! They're better! She does oneshots really, really well!