The one-shot was pretty funny & sexy, but unfortunately, I am not a fan of pubic hair on girls, so that was a turn-off. It is about a girl who loves her big brother getting molested on the train (right, I should add the 'Brother complex' tag). However, she had realistic reactions. The dick & boobs were a bit too big, & the girl's nipples were actually visible through her clothes, making me think it was a cheap hentai at first, but I applaud the author for remembering to make her have underwear on, even though her panties were just tied with a string.
The good translators had the girl say 'Big bro' instead of 'Onii-chan' for some reason so, yeah, she even screams 'Big broooooo' at some points. *Shakes head* Also, the sound effects are cleverly translated as 'wet noises,' 'thrusting' (O RLY?) and such, instead of 'doki' & the like, but I will hand it to them for at least keeping Momo (the main character) using third-person when referring to herself.
Anyway, the ending made me laugh. It was okay overall. Momo was too cute & hot for her own good. A very light-hearted read. Recommended.
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