It's Shimotsuki Kairi sensei, so that art is impeccable. I loved that even for a one-shot, the plot felt deep and not shallow. I really wished there could have been more.

This one-shot is like a single serving of cheesecake, just enough to whet the appetite, turning craving into full-blown hunger. Just damn. The characters are well drawn, beautiful beasts as their simple, hedonistic evil both pulls you in and leaves you wanting more hard and fast. The best part is you can read it again and again. So, even if it leaves you wanting more - read it over and over. Really there needs to be more of this manga-ka made available, she's awesome.

The art's real pretty, the characters seem cool, and the story's not bad. I just wish it wasn't a oneshot. It would be good if it's continued as a series or something.

I don't know. This one shocked me. At first I couldn't quite categorize it, but it turned out to be quite interesting and different. I do have to agree with kurosu_yuuki, that there could be a sequel, which would add a bit more depth to the plot maybe. There's a lot of potential.

The art is good, but the plot needs more development. Its missing suspense. I'm just disappointed in the Uke for giving in so quick...even though he had a gun =_= (wants more resistance).
It would be great if this one-shot was continued.

Man. I'd give this a 10 but it's so good that I feel like I'm being jipped here; it's so freaking short! The art is incredible, the sex is nitty-gritty and I just want MORE. Give it a shot - but be warned, you're gonna be left panting. XD

I loved it, and I hate that I loved it. I can't find anything else like it. This was a short and simple one-shot, but I want more. I want so bad. It's kinda of depressing. Not the manga, just the fact that the manga had such an effect on me. Fuck. It isn't right.

for one, theres no girly looking uke whose only diffrence from being a girl is that he is a he.
the art is amazing, the couple is amazing, and its a nice short read.
good characterization for a oneshot, too.

It has a lot of potential. It would be awesome if this one-shot went further. As for a one-shot, it's good for it's smut and has a lot of deepen plot, but it gives the feeling of something being incomplete.