The art is really really good, the plot is very interesting. But damn, this is a mess. There's a lack of transition between scenes so great that everything feels disconnected. It just comes in succession and unfortunately it also comes with a lack of information on a lot of important plot points. That really doesn't help us understanding wtf is going on.

I also really dislike the way MC is treated by the MLs, there's a lot of SA that feels normalized. The endgame ML has a pretty good redemption arc, but they never actually talk about what he did wrong, how he plans to atone etc. There's just a vague blanket apology for "treating MC badly" and then endgame ML goes on with assisting MC from the shadows, without asking MC what he wants. Fucked up dynamics and that docks a lot of points for me.

... Last updated on March 5th, 2024, 11:51pm

it was really fun and light, but some parts of the plot just... happened... many poorly executed things, and the whole manhua sometimes feels written by different people. There were long and detailed chapters, and those short and skipping parts that felt necessary to the plot as a whole. I really enjoyed the story tho.