I've read all of the reviews here, and it's as if the reviewers are talking about two very different works. So, I hope my review (as of C.16) will give some balance.
Artwork: My ranking system goes from:
- This is a work of art
- Fantastic
- Great
- Very good
- Good
- Fine
- OK
- Serviceable
- Ugh or Not for me.
I'd say this work is somewhere between good and very good. It's better than fine, definitely. I would definitely not say it is mediocre or poor.
Character development: Both the FL and ML have insecurities they will need to work through. The FL's ducal family and household of servants have treated her poorly, telling her that she is worthless and that her survival depends on her performing her role well. She is a kind person who's clearly not questioned whether these people are right. (She is no Bianca, the other redhead but with a strong will and sense of self.) She is certainly not strong-willed. That is ok. She has the potential to become someone with a strong, healthy sense of self and self-respect. It will likely be a long road. I hope she retains her stutter.
The ML, coming from mercenary origins--in other words, disposable brutes in the eyes of the nobility, has his own self-esteem issues. His may not be so obvious because he is so well-loved and respected in his own domain. However, it's very clear that his humbler origins lead him to consider himself inadequate in his wife's company. He clearly cherishes her but cannot really see her as she is because he has his own insecurities he's projecting onto her. The story hasn't yet focused much on him.
Pacing: I haven't felt the need necessarily to drop the series. It doesn't necessarily feel slow to me as of now. Our heroine has taken on--partly for the wrong reasons--her first challenge as the new mistress of the manor. She constantly doubts herself but doesn't give up. That deserves applause.
So I'll come back later to update once I near the end of season 1.
UPDATE as of C.80
The artwork, which has been improving as the series progresses, is solidly very good or great now. There are some truly gorgeous scenes and good use of the scrolling format.
Character development: Some people will find the pace of the characters' growth too slow. I, too, would appreciate a slightly faster pace, but it's much more reflective of reality. While the FL has been growing and, more importantly, made solid effort to grow, she still hasn't addressed the fundamental issues that plague both her and the ML. She's afraid to reveal what she deems to be her weakness, so she ends up not correcting her husband's misbegotten ideas when it seems as if he would be receptive to the truth.
Anyhow, I will likely continue to read to the end.