I love everything about this story. Everything with the dynamic of FL and ML. Every damn thing.

Well, idk why but every single one person who read this story disliked the Mc or FL. I think i'ts not FL fault, you know... if ML not distrub the relationship about FL and her boyfriend's this will be not like this. FL work and have debt for ML, because she is willing to help her ex boyfriend and her father. But i guess ML is a little ekhem... extreme... I personally like angsty comics and i guess i didn't want season 2. Because if in season 2 ML and FL have a relationship... i dont think it will be alright :v
Then, i guess the FL and ML in this story will not have happy ending.

Such a waste of time but stay because nice art. Doesn't have good story but okay just read by yourself and u would know. FL went to a good school even a noble who had more about education than other people. She should be able to have a better job to make money and go from adversity. very weird she owed him more to help her boyfriend's younger sister than her father when her boyfriend also could work alone but he looked more like unemployment. for ML, fine it looks like he is yandere and likes FL very much, described intelligent in some scene concerns about the family business. ML do good at his role

One of the shitti*est stories I've ever read.
Wtf is even they doing.
The fl (true bit*h) owes ml a great debt the ML likes her very much but what does she do she goes and spend her money on her boyfriend.
Really a trash between sea

... Last updated on January 25th, 2022, 8:18am

It's very pretty, but I struggle to connect with any of the characters.

The ML is creepy, The FL is childish and their love story is not believable.

Honestly, I like Yandere stories - I just don't like them being the ML, so I guess this story was never meant for me in the first place. Elenoa cares about nothing but the FL, everything he does is for her and it bores me. He also occasionally goes into these tangents about how bad of a person he is that could be ripped straight out of some 16 years old emo dude's 2003 Myspace page right under the bio explaining how he identifies as a Werewolf . Live your truth Elenoa - but stop talking about it.

Irina was a cute teenager, unfortunately she had 0 character development as she grew older. The author passes it off as a joke that she tries everything once, gives it her best but is just naturally ungifted in everything. But that's just not how skills work. You have to try, try and try again until it works. FL picking up an axe, failing to cut firewood and all the concerned side characters taking the axe away telling her they'll do it for her just isn't gonna fly if you want to sell me on a hardworking FL. Get that axe back and chop until your fingers bleed! Chop until you can make a fecking Bongo Drum out of a twig just by looking at it! JUST STOP GIVING UP AFTER THE FIRST TRY FOR ONCE.

So we are now left with this wishy-washy love story of how Edgelord Mcreepy cosplays as a Knight in Shining Armor as Madame Not-Like-Other-Humans weasels her way out of becoming his girlfriend through her quirkiness. The 2nd ML seems decent but I think the author realised no one would root for the couple she is trying to sell us so she just removed him from the plot as much as possible.

It falls flat as a Shoujo because the ML is too creepy and falls flat as a Josei because the FL is too incapable. So who is it for?

Beautiful art, poorly written story.