The story is hardly anything new and the execution didn't really uplift it in anyway, but it's not a completely terrible oneshot all in all. Just average in every sense of the word.

Also to the commenter below me, no Mizutani wasn't frightened and Arata's face wasn't supposed to look creepy there lmao, that's just how this artist usually draws her characters' facial expressions. Which is why I've never been a huge fan of her; the art style just isn't my thing at all.

YEA YEA IT STARTED AS A CUTE STORY AND ENDED AS A CUTE ONE BUT IS IT JUST ME OR YUGE'S EXPRESSION WAS F CREEPY AND ARATA'S FACE WAS FRIGHTENED IDK MAYBE IT'S JUST ME

I...really don't know what to say to be honest. Especially because it's an oneshot. As expected, it's too short. That ending was sweet and all. I felt bad for Yuge (Or Yuga I forgot already lol) The art is cute, but not special plot, so I'm just gonna give it 6 rate. I'm extremely picky about giving ratings and stuffs like that.

... Last updated on January 31st, 2016, 2:27am

I've read this type of story who knows how many times already. It's because it's a oneshot that it's always lacking something in it. I dunno what, but it feels a little out. But, I'm giving it an 8 since the ending was kinda sweet..

for such a short story there was actually real content in here. not a complex plot, of course, but sufficient to enjoy, and there is actually enough character definition to care a bit -- it was a really nice touch that mizutani didn't pass the blame. and hey, no raping!

Very cute, especially Arata's 'angry' face when he's a kid. The art is good, the story flows, but it is very simplistic. The entire oneshot delivers all it promises: a short, little yaoi commercial.

This one shot was good. It was very cute tho. The teacher breaks it of but still has feeling towards his student. Pretty common story plot. Beautiful art wise, but in a way lacking in story wise.