The Art
...is a bit amateurish at times, but the lines are strong and sure, and full of vibrant life. I can see much promise. Steadily, with each release, her art gains strength at conveying the story's tale and character's emotion. I did chuckle at how the western outfits for the Taisho era seemed a bit too modern. The different-coloured eyes of our little uke were fascinating to see how the mangaka could craftily create the illusion of two-colours with only black and white.
Ozaki's anger still isn't quite illustrated right; he seems to be more 'worried' or 'fearful' when the expression the mangaka is trying to illustrate is rage/fury. The behaviour clarifies the emotion, but it could have been stronger with the right facial expression. Speaking of anger, it was a little to 'gentle' or 'tame' for me: Even when he was 'raging' angry, it was always fairly mild; it did spur on their first intimacy, but it's never really non-con or 'violent' per se. His anger is raising his voice and biting his willing partner's neck a little too suddenly and a little too roughly.
More on the Story
The first three chapters tell the story of a youth whose quest to find his father for the sake of his mother. In the end, it isn't about the father at all, but about the boy coming to learn what is truly the most important to him. From the first chapter of their Eliza Doolittle meeting, through to the second chapter of their commitment to one another to the final chapter which is a simple, sweet story about trying to please one another and communication woes, they were all a delight to read. The rapidly alternating internal thoughts are fairly smoothly delivered, but you have to keep on your toes to realize who's thinking what.
The eclectic group of friends (there are 4 of them) that the main couple have, are distinct and have enough depth behind them that it is obvious (and in her omake she does mention it) that there is a plan for the other two couples.
The final chapter is a comedy of errors so-to-speak. The dismay that the uke feels when he realizes how what he's wanted has been in front of him for so long and he's never noticed was a thought provoking angle.