Everything about this title is a little off. The story seems really interesting so far, but it's poorly executed. Events jump all over the place without any clear break -- sometimes the story will just shift from one situation and set of characters to a completely different one, with no indication anything's changed (except it's confusing). The characters are interesting, but there's too many of them, and minor characters that are only seen once every third chapter will suddenly appear and do something totally insane, and then disappear for chapters again. It's difficult to become attached to any of the characters, with the exception of the two main characters, because there's very little development. Speaking of the main charachters, Senguu and Akari are likable, but there's no real depth to them, so it's difficult to feel any attachment to them. Any sort of serious behavior on their parts just seems like it's getting in the way of the action and pantsu. Speaking of pantsu, YG is overflowing with ecchi fanservice. Honestly, too much. I'm all for gratuitous nudity, etc, but there's gratuitous and GRATUITOUS, and this title falls into that latter "holy crap wow O_o" category. The fanservice is distracting, and sometimes just weird-looking. Which bring us to the artwork. For a title with so much great artwork, I'm stunned at how much seriously crappy artwork there is. I mean, we're talking about some serious QUALITY artwork here. When I'm looking at an image of a half-clothed girl, it'd be nice if her body parts were drawn 1.) proportionally, 2.) consistently between one panel and the next, and 3.) undistorted - as in "the body is not shaped like that". Terrible artwork mixed with great artwork is so frustrating. This title seems like the whole thing is a cookie-cutter-generic, "throw everything that's popular with boy's manga in - that'll make it sell well", recycled and unoriginal. Sad, because it really does have a lot of potential...
Too long; didn't read? Fun story, but it's obvious the author/artist were rushed, and it shows. Big time.
7/10 for raw potential and pantsu.
Edit After Sudden Series Completion at Chapter 11: Guess the publishers felt the same way.