Mario

It would have been a decent story without all the jump cuts. The narrative hopped around the place and one minute no one knew where a character was, the next panel they were together again. Very poorly edited.

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Did you really study mafia life !?

by ALT+CTL
11 years ago

Rating: 1.0 / 10.0

This is one of worst mafia manga that I have ever read, after down fall of Sun-ken Rock series I started reading this manga. I will advise you to never waste your time to read this manga.

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Terrible... Did he only redraw it?

by Baniita
12 years ago

Rating: 3.0 / 10.0

First of all, dude, Mario.. You're wearing your earring on the gay side.

"I'm the type that's far more attracted to money than to women. It's way better to jack off to Washington's face on the bills!" UM. Dude, that sentence can be taken in many ways.

What's with this incestual shit--it's a bit too Freudian for my tastes (according to him, men seek out women who resemble their mothers--ew).

Terribly written, and the main character is entirely ineffectual. It should be called "Saori" instead.

I have no idea what happened at the end. And Saori just happened to fall in love with him? What? How the heck do you fall for someone who says you remind him of his mother--that's like, a total deboner.

At least the art isn't bad. A lot of people don't like Kishi's style, but I like it quite a bit.

And it calls itself a masterpiece... What.

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Ungood One Shot

by NoGoodTuna
12 years ago

Rating: 4.0 / 10.0

It was just a really dull and boring stoy and just hard to get into to even care about the characters. Saori just failed to impress and was dull while the other character designs could have been a bit more enhanced and pleasing. The ending moments felt way too rushed and they just seemed to jump from place to place, one moment Saori is nowhere to be found and then all of a sudden they find her. (I guess he must have expanded upon it in the 130-160 version?) Then just a bad ending. I wonder how Kishimoto can put out Naruto which I find is an excellent story but then this.

Oh and the guns, after seeing guns in other series (Jormungand, even the one in BLue Exorcist), they just looked really unpolished and lacking details here in Mario.

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