So sad that this didn't quote pan out the way I liked it. While there was good potential for the story, with an Alpha that has to do anything to get a highly compatible Omega to give birth to his child, the char's background, motivations and emotions were so badly drawn I can't even. Case in point, seme is a neatness freak, but until the uke mentions it, you can't really figure it out. If there are hints, they are too subtle. This effectively kills much of the sass of this manhwa. The seme has an intense dislike for omegas, and it's never explained why, and this is very important for the storyline. And the uke, while not a badly written char (which sadly is a rarity in yaoi) suffers in comparison. He's bit more fleshed out, but this should have been deeper and more intense. The seme goes go trought a redemption arc that wasn't half bad, but this never gets the sway it needs exactly because his character was so one dimensional before (ruthless, cold alpha).

As I noted, the storyline was actually pretty good, especially since the grandma is a total badass (loved this about her). The art was mediocre, far from bad but nothing spectacular either. Since I don't care that much for smut, can't comment it too much, but there is not too much of it (I prefer emotional scenes to smut any day!). But since this has my favorite trope (uke runs away from seme while pregnant), I still have a bit of a soft spot for this overall.

No, this could have been so much better if the chars were handled in a more sensitive way. But still a nice guilty pleasure if you like the mpreg trope!

This was the worst Omegaverse I have ever read. Neither the plot fit the genre specified by the author, nor was the art good enough to perhaps gain a point.
I couldn't find the genre of romance or smut specified by the author anywhere, for me the plot was an annoying comedy.
The terrible art style certainly ensured that I didn't like any of the characters. In this short story the artist changed Haejin and Hwan three times and not being able to draw a butt in the smut scenes was terrible but more terrible was this disgusting baby. Also the artist seems totally inexperienced with toxic BL, it all just seems ridiculously annoying to me. Even though I finished reading the story, I think it was a total waste of time and I definitely won't read the story a second time.

Hooray another omegaverse story where the bottom needs to provide a child for the top.

Safe to say I had high hopes for this one but....., things get a bit ridiculous later on (e.g. the bottom running in a forest away from people, having a random gass mask throwing grenades all the while being pregnant).

I rather reccomend Campus Trap. ! If you are looking for a somewhat similar in categories type of story.

I do want to note about the artist: they improve tremendously with the current webtoon they are working on!! : a webtoon adaption of a Chaepali web novel !

... Last updated on February 25th, 2024, 4:28pm