I don't usually read shota or like it if I've for some reason been tricked into reading it. I was mostly attracted by the art here, and it was very pretty, but there was at least one good point to this besides the artwork as well.
The one thing I kinda liked was that this wasn't a story about a man violating an ignorant and naïve, innocent boy but the initiative came from the twins. That, however, also made it rather unrealistic. Children are really curious it's true and that goes for sex as well but no kid is that lusty... The sex was over the top and with the toys and everything? Bleh.
Another thing seriously disturbing about it was how really young they were. Shota basically deals with under-age boys but these kids were really small. Not just barely under 18 years of age but like five year olds tops!
Also the fact that the guy was their sister's boyfriend is pretty irritating. I mean, preying on your girl friend's kid brothers? No morals, even if the jail-bait twins initially came on to him. And cheating on your girl friend too! The only ameliorating feature was that...well...wouldn't wanna spoil the ending. And I'm not too sure it was a happy one either!?
Well there were too many issues with this for me to rate this any higher than 4/10. It could have been done much better but people who do enjoy shota will definitely enjoy this. The only shota yaoi I've ever actually liked, now that I think about it, would be Super Lovers. The only one.