A fallen angel finds himself infatuated with a human, and despite knowing the consequences, he decides to indulge himself... if only for a little while.
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I get that the author wanted to make this oneshot seem poetic and poignant and all, and she did achieve that, but a little more clarity and less ambiguity would've gone a much longer way and raised this from just alright to very decent. When your craft is too confusing to understand it will lower the level of enjoyment one could get out of it and might even come across as pretentious, which is not something anyone would desire I'd reckon.
It wouldn't make sense to specify that the dream lasted only one night if the boy died of old age, I mean why not having hawt sex afterwards too, right? There is a scene when the angel embraces the boy and immediately, a scene with a pair of hands that in my opinion look like they don't hold anything anymore. And afterwards, the angel is shown wearing the boy's pendant. I prefer to think that at least the boy was absorbed into the angel and they will be always together... somehow sob
Very pretty art, liked the story although I wish it had been longer. It has an ambiguous ending, read it twice to understand it better(think I kinda got it, but I'm not sure o.O)
I know the boy dies in the end, but I'm not sure if it's because the angel "embraced" him or because of the passing of time, I really wish there was a continuation or maybe a bit more of depth Willard's background Anyway sad ending 🙁 but a nice read ^-^
It is a short story and I didn't expect this to be wonderful. It was not, but it wasn't bad either. Beautifully drawn, a good soft yaoi with a nice plot (even if fallen angels are SO used in manga!). I don't regret reading it.
Hmn good theme in this one shot and its full to the brim with uneasy feelings and doubt, but the ending is very ambiguous and the shortness of the story prevents any real plot or point, but it has a sort of poetic feel to it, and the art is quite beautiful.
It was a rather (not sudden because he was saying about the boy's death all the way through) but it was like the author couldn't decide how to kill the boy off. The art is wonderful, it would have been a 10 out of 10 if the story was expanded and better explained. I believe the boy dies because of angel. (But not because they had sex, there are several scenes of them together afterwards.)
Interpret as you will but it's something that I do like immensely.
Art is nice, story had some promising at first but then... it ended just like that. I truly have no idea what writer was trying to convey.
Did the boy survive or did he die? Or did he fall into darkness, just like the fallen angel did? And if the boy did die, it was never explained why sex with a fallen angel would lead to his death? ???
I agree with the comment below that though this one-shot has potential, especially with such a nice artwork, the plot isn't deep enough. Probably because it's just a one-shot, which is why I felt it could have been better if it was expanded. When I came across this by chance on Be-Boy mag, I was hoping to find other chapters of the story. I was pretty disappointed to find that it's only a one-shot.
Very nice artwork. If only it was longer and has a more concrete plot. There's potential for this mangaka. I do hope to see more from her.
So, what was the main point? Ok, this is a oneshot and it is supposed to be short but it did not have a clear message. What was the point of telling a story if it did not tell anything? Anyways, the art was still good, so it deserves 8.5 over 10.