It's strange, but this is all I can think about this title. It's just strange. Now, I have a thing for reading shoujo mangas for no apparent reason anyway but this one is just weird (though I'll keep reading it regardless). To put it simply:
You can't tell where it's going.
Normally you'd think that last sentence would be a good thing (a sign of plot twists and whatnot), but this one just doesn't make any sense. Half the time I'm spending time thinking about the characters' motivations and actions, and wondering whether this thing is going to go ANYWHERE AT ALL. To put it into a picture form, think of all of the people in relationships (or close to being in them) as scales. The author is (repeatedly) randomly putting weights onto either side of the scale that make each character lean towards one side or the other, but the actual reason for this doesn't make any sense (or more often it just doesn't exist). About the only relationship that seems developed towards one definite end is... well I won't mention his name but I'm sure you'll find out. Even then there's no real explanation for why he's just randomly and almost suddenly going after this chick... the setting is confusing as all hell.
Everyone else just seems to be randomly tilting one way or another.
They're also doing random stuff all of the time. As in, I can't make sense of who's where at what time and why the action is happening there, or why they would be there in the first place. It's fine to just say that "this is happening here" as an explanation for showing a scene, but in the overall scheme of things many of these "scenes" happen to be completely pointless. I can't tell if they're convenient or not to the plot or anything of the sort... because they don't make sense in the first place.
I don't know what novel everyone's talking about, but I hope to god the novel is easier to follow than this... THING.
Ah, but the art is good, and the characters chicks look hot/cute/whatever. That's at least one positive...
Now that's not to say it doesn't have its other fun parts.
Each distinctive scene is somewhat fun to follow, and you eventually may start getting some sense of character development...
But it just has too little coherence. The way the thing is laid out is just far too random, and there's too much stuff going on at once, that the author apparently has trouble tying together.