I'm such a sicko with a capital O.
I found it hot. Yes, shouta isn't for everyone and I hate pedophiles, believing they should all burn and have their penises chopped up while still attached to them...but this style of shouta is just hot. Like hawt.
I love the willing ukes and I think that's the allure of shouta. Kids with innocence and naivete doing really dirty stuff.
First chapter--Takato(I think he's a middle schooler) just got out of the bathroom only to meet the hot gaze of his older brother's friend. His bro and his bro's friend are in high school. After they leave, Takato jerks himself off thinking of his bro's friend.
His bro's friend eventually screws him.(Takato does a little bit seducing which I just love)
Second chapter--Takato is 'playing' with his two friends, doing their usual lick and suck but feels strangely unsatisfied ever since he got screwed by his bro's friend. They end up having a hot threesome. Double penetration, anyone? I loved Yoh and I can see him being a really hot seme when he grows up.Heh.
Third chapter--I didn't find this as appealing as the previous chapters. Maybe because Saeki(innocent uke) is new to the whole sex thing? I dunno.
At least with the threesome, they all discover screwing is awesome together. Here, it's just the usual take advantage-of-innocent-classmate. In the first chapter, the uke came willingly, even doing a little seduction. Here, the uke just wanted to make a friend, instead, found out you could get screwed in the ass. I would have understood if he wanted a relationship since there was kissing and hearts but in the end the uke says he's happy he made his first friend(since he's the new transferee kid)
Fourth chapter--not on reading sites. Missing?
Fifth chapter--again, not as appealing as the first two. Cute, but not as hot. The two boys are already in some sort of a relationship. There's some wearing of naughty lingerie, seme teasing the uke. I didn't find it as hot because it involved 'love'. I wanted to read this not because of romance but okay, whatever, it's there.
I'm fine with just smut, porn without plot, just don't give it to me with something that's supposedly 'love' when I know they're just kids. Crap, now I'm getting all serious.
Sixth chapter--hmm, this has an 'I love youuus!' factor but it actually works. Why? Because the uke does the seducing once again. Yuuri(uke) is like "You don't hate me right?" and basically goes 'I like you! Lets do it!' with a come hither expression.
Again, I don't like the 'love' factor thrown in with these types of yaoi(specifically with shouta) because it's just tooooo unbelievable for me. But here, it worked because unlike in the third and fifth chapter, the seme is the one sorta innocent(inexperienced)...and because the uke got on his knees and willingly gave the seme a little service which I prefer to semes giving ukes service. Personal bias I guess. The seme is new to the whole experience and we get to read how he discovers how awesome banging someone you like is.
A plus for this chapter is that it's in the POV of the seme which we rarely get and I found pretty hot because the uke was able to take the lead in their relationship by employing his sexuality. I love it when the bottom has the upper hand. Both literally and figuratively because here, the uke is riding the seme from on top. They did it once more with the seme on top but the uke still had the upper hand.
The ending was great. It's refreshing to read yaoi without having the uke just lying there on his back, weeping while the seme made him feel good.
Seventh chapter--this one has two friends, the seme gets all worked up because he keeps daydreaming about his friend(eventual uke) so the uke misunderstands. They clear everything up with: "I like you!" "I like you too!" and sorta go 'let's go screw on the rooftop because that's totally what people who were just friends and more do right after a confession!'
Sorry. They don't really say that but that's what basically happens.
Eight chapter--very short but very hot. Older seme, shouta uke. Sexy. Wish it could have gone on longer.
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