After reading 20 chapters I have no clue what is happening. The MC doesn't know what is happening. This is just terrible writing.

I'm curious and continue to read because I want to understand the various mysteries, but clearly the story is written poorly. All the characters are so flat they are barely background worthy. I would argue that the MC is the only character in the entire story so far.

There is absolutely no character development. As for necessary world-building, nothing has been explained.

... Last updated on February 18th, 2023, 7:07pm

Update: Dropped this at chapter 29 because I got the sense that this might not be my thing and read spoilers online and oh boy does it become very much a psychological twisted story.

I appreciate the dialogue and thoughts of the female lead. She's reborn in a difficult situation and trying to do right. Traumatic themes are touched upon and explored though only at a more shallow level and not in depth. The "psychological" part of this slowly surfaces after that.

What's most interesting is just seeing how she's trying to navigate the world when she only has limited information to work with, and is serious about doing what she can for the male lead before setting him free. The overall mystery of what the original character whose body she inhabits was up to is also intriguing. The art is okay - proportions are noticeably weird but it's not to the point where it's jarring.

There's a review below about her being suddenly impulsive, and to me it wasn't out of left field at all - while the dialogue and situation so far have been pretty serious in tone, the female lead also decided to immediately dedicate the next two years of her life to a convent which also meant abandoning the male lead in two weeks instead of looking after him to make sure things resolve okay, which I was like whoa okay I guess. She also can't stand the feelings that remain from her past self, so it all checks out to me. The tone is serious and the female lead is too, but this seems to be more of a slow-paced complex emotions story than an intelligent strong female lead story.

... Last updated on September 13th, 2022, 1:07am

Idk but like I’m hooked for this

edit:

it was interesting while it lasted

... Last updated on August 20th, 2022, 1:57am

It kept me hooked though the character design lacked diversity. One of the prince knight looked like him(though maybe they are related, read as of ch 20) and the girl acquaintance of FL look like the ML. Also I think her decision to cut off ties with Mag is good. She probably thought he will gain independence and actually decide to get mad at her.

... Last updated on June 26th, 2022, 5:25am

It was interesting. It was beautiful and then illogical writing happened.

The woman possessing Lyna’s was being so careful and considerate to undo his brainwashing and then ON IMPULSE tells him that she’s sick of him….WTF?! I was SO sucked in and then THAT BS Happened…. It was SO good…. WHY!?!😕 Breaks the promise she made to him ALL ON IMPULSE!!! If you’re going to write a character who is careful, intuitive and logical don’t just pop sh*t in there because of IMPULSE!! I feel so let down. _(:3」∠)_