Phalene

in the end when the text is "that butterlfy won't leave the side of the dead moth..." I was like NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then it says i finally found u... yah, you finally found her, but she's DEAD!! u found your beloved and she's DEAD!! this is a sad story!!

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Interesting

by mycat8u
14 years ago

Rating: 7.5 / 10.0

This story is more subtle in it's message. It is a story similar to showing what happens if a bird loves a fish. They cannot be together but they yearn to. And just to put this out there; moths are not active in the day time.

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cute but....

by llammie
15 years ago

Rating: N/A

do you realize at the end of the day, the tragic ending is all due to carelessness and stupidity?

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...

by Miriette Le Fay
16 years ago

Rating: 10.0 / 10.0

Alot of people have complain about this oneshot being too short. But is this really a poblem? Oneshots are short by nature and this story has a beganing, midlle and ending. It doesn't need more pages to make her good.
I hope people will give it a try since the art is pretty pretty pretty good. 😉

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Cute

by torrentchan
16 years ago

Rating: 10.0 / 10.0

Very cute but sad for me. Too bad it is short, or maybe luckily it is short? Since i wouldnt want to go through a long story to get this sad. Worth a read people!!

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Brief, yet effective.

by bloogal
17 years ago

Rating: 6.7 / 10.0

It's an unusual concept, I haven't come across it before. And like jiguo28 said, its brevity adds to the story. Well... just goes to say, don't let an opportunity pass you by. You might end up regretting it.

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Alright.

by 3CL1P35
17 years ago

Rating: 7.0 / 10.0

BIG cons: Little too short & it really leaves you like, "Wtf? That's it?" or if you're like me, I was just "WTF?!"

Pros: The art was decent. Maybe a little more than decent because the man (or should I say butterfly?) was drawn incredibly beautiful. Cough (Has a manga fetish for "long-haired-and-no-bangs" men.) Cough

Overall, it's not that worth it. It felt like reading the first chapter of a manga and it suddenly cut-off after 8 or something pages. I picked this because I was in the mood for a tragic, tear jeaker oneshot but.. this didn't live up to the "tragedy" part too well, or at all.

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This is very short oneshot.

by jjguo28
18 years ago

Rating: 8.0 / 10.0

It's about 8 pages long. I wish it was longer, but perhaps its brevity adds to the story. You'll know what I mean if you read it.

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SOO CUTE~

by rita
18 years ago

Rating: 10.0 / 10.0

It is a very sweet shojo manga. Definitely worth the read.

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